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Ode to a Toad
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Ode to a Toad |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rewrite Repost: Ode to a Toad Lily pads act homes lagoon Below a chrome and sexy moon Where nomad toads all Galahads Croak their love and wait unclad. Flamboyant they gloat their glower, Offering dower on the hour. knights of the night they sing and recite Croaking with might their songs of delight. Ruckus tunes of male ensnare Toady songs, beyond compare. Horny for the closure of mate Below a rapist moon of fate. Bold and constant is their sweep Passionate sounds of rebeep. Roaring a rile of rhapsody Stating fruitions destiny. Exploding echoes of flimflam Frantically calling, here I am. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Big smiles...they do get loud, don't they? The tree and pond frogs in our pasture aren't quite out yet, but soon enough, soon enough... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
You're funny, Sy...I love toads! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
LOL ... cheers to you Sy ... what a great read to start my morning. Loved this!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
ROTFLMBO I love you and your horny toads, Sy...   |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Happy to make you smile.  Duncan, Funny is good.  Kit, Have a happy. Nan, And this horny toad loves you. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (giggles in delight) Oh Seymour, this one made me laugh, this is sooooo funny, delightful, and even a little naughty! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, ribbit ribbit! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Glad you enjoyed. Thank you. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy, this is what I mean when I say my day isn't complete without a dose of you. I’m grinning like a Cheshire cat, or indeed the Cheshire cat. The song A Frog Went A Courting is echoing in my head now and I shall be humming it for ages. This is utterly utterly wonderful, thank you darling boy, you must come again, soon.  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 [This message has been edited by Marsha (03-14-2002 06:08 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Laughing at Nan's response *s I once had a toad in my raised pond...don't know how he found his way in there...but the sound was so loud, echoing. He was well camouflaged. *s M |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ I recall the 'original' ... and this one is just as adorable ! Come on over to my pad ! ! I'll make a Prince out of ya' ~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Ruckus tunes of male ensnare Toady songs, beyond compare. Horny for the closure of mate Below a rapist moon of fate. Bold and constant is their sweep Passionate sounds of rebeep. Roaring a rile of rhapsody Stating fruitions destiny. Exploding echoes of flimflam Frantically calling, here I am. ====================================== Id risk warts for a kiss  your pad or mine? *L* I know there are some Randy dragonflies on this pond *winkiewinkie* |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
LOve it! ((Seymour)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
HeeHee! Shucks, if it were only as easy a croaking under a moon! Enjoyed! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mushy, a toad and he may turn into a prince.Maureen, Glad you enjoyed. Marge, It's a deal. JM, Neither, Lets use the secret one. LOL Love Ya.Newell, Thank you. S Authur Grey, Well it's almost the same. LOL |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
 Now if I ran into a dapper toad like you I'd let him croak me a thing or two. The tune we'd sing would be pretty loud, bet he'd walk away strutting kinda proud! LMBO at you, this was THE cutest thing! The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives. ~* Albert Einstein *~ [This message has been edited by Mysteria (03-14-2002 05:05 PM).] |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
What would a toad be without a Tabin? Not half the toad you made it. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, I thank you with a big hug and Munda, Enjoyed your reply, thank you. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Seymour I just love these little guys. We had a creek running across our back yard at the last home we had, and I would sit out and listen to these sweet sounds.. what is the one that comes out at night. Loud but so nice to listen to. This I really appreciated. Nice write. floria Floria |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Floria, So glad you enjoyed the write. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
I remember this, Sey. A very enjoyable poem. Cor |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I'll answer you as soon as I get this frog outta my throat!   |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Corinne, So glad you remembered. Balladeer, I think it's more smoke then frog. LOL |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Wunerful stuff Seymour! I really enjoyed croak.Maree |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Angel, Glad you liked it, thanks. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
My Dad lives near a swamp... so the chorus of "Here I am"s can be almost deafening. *G* I love this Seymour... it's delightful. And I love the comments you've inspired. Well done! *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suthern, Only for you. |
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jennirey Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 198North Richland HillsTx |
I like this, My Eleven year old daughter had to write a poem this year and wrote. "Ode to a Toe" I thought of that when i read this,, Jen Treasure every moment that you have! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Jen, How interesting thank you for the read. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sy, I nearly croaked over this one. ROTFLMAO |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Larry C, Glad you enjoyed. LOL |
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