Open Poetry #19 |
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JamesBowie Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 252big old Bangor Maine up by the shack |
Contemplation requires forward thought into the realms where fish swim on glass and daylight shimmers through gossamer strands of cobwebs left by confused spiders, who only weave because it has always been so In the days to follow, he vividly depicts the shapes forming from the biting frost of fringe thought, where standards not withstanding, change occurs with random order in a chaotic clash with no sense of tranquility Trembling hands put pen to paper and scribe the overpowering visions into words that entail a gravid future where the rich and powerful shall receive no comfort from their earthly spoils cast out, as bare as their arrival on this earth As it is so, then it shall be. |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"change occurs with random order in a chaotic clash with no sense of tranquility Trembling hands put pen to paper" I love this |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
"As it is so, then it shall be." and it IS!!!!! ..... an awesome write, james.... very well done!! the images of cobwebs and spiders and the lines "the shapes forming from the biting frost of fringe thought" damn! fringe thought? it's just frigging good poetry ... your images are awesome |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
that change knows no tranquility...is a good one James...and that is how life is meant to be..courage [This message has been edited by ecrivan (03-09-2002 07:30 AM).] |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
James this is a very well written and constructed poem, I really like the way this flows smoothly lead don’t follow into night see the light begin This is really well written, Very well done, much truth in this smiles to your soul Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
James, Some wonderful lines, very much ennjoyed the read. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Contemplation requires forward thought" So true. And your ending? Perfect. Thank you for sharing these thoughts. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Much truth herein James....awesome words... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You always give us something to contemplate, JB... |
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JamesBowie Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 252big old Bangor Maine up by the shack |
deep huh? |
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