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SmartChick
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0 posted 2002-03-13 10:53 PM


How much good does it do me
To tell you how I feel
The pain that I feel inside
You do not think is real

The impression I get from you
Is that you really do not care
If the feelings were not there
I'd have no reason to even share

I thought that you and I
Would grow old together
I guess I must have been wrong
I kept hoping it would get better

I believed the things you said to me
Hanging onto the hope you gave
I wouldn't be here if I hadn't of
There is nothing there to save

A love I had never felt before
I had felt when I met you
To me it was real scarey
I wasn't sure what I should do

I only did what I knew best
Just to keep on loving you
This love will never die, I know
I'll take this love with me, too
© By Sue 2-10-02


© Copyright 2002 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-13 10:56 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may the magic of love forever shine in your heart and fill you with true happiness! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-03-13 11:01 PM


written from your heart..we all find that special someone who no one can replace..once in our life..i can feel the yearning  in yor heart hugsss..

                ~Vic

ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2002-03-13 11:05 PM


So sweetly given... Love and luck.
ThisDiamond

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4 posted 2002-03-13 11:32 PM


This one was written from the heart, Sue...and done very well.
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5 posted 2002-03-13 11:34 PM


Hmmm... I don't quite know what to say to this. I like it, but I don't know what to say. Odd... Hope I may have the attitude you have if things go screwy for me.

I want to die peacefully, in my sleep, like my grandfather, not screaming, terrified, like his passengers.

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6 posted 2002-03-13 11:45 PM


SmartChick~
Sweet Sue ... 'the impression I get' is that you need a great big *HUG*
Love you sweet sister of my heart~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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