Open Poetry #19 |
The Impression I Get |
SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
How much good does it do me To tell you how I feel The pain that I feel inside You do not think is real The impression I get from you Is that you really do not care If the feelings were not there I'd have no reason to even share I thought that you and I Would grow old together I guess I must have been wrong I kept hoping it would get better I believed the things you said to me Hanging onto the hope you gave I wouldn't be here if I hadn't of There is nothing there to save A love I had never felt before I had felt when I met you To me it was real scarey I wasn't sure what I should do I only did what I knew best Just to keep on loving you This love will never die, I know I'll take this love with me, too © By Sue 2-10-02 |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may the magic of love forever shine in your heart and fill you with true happiness! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
written from your heart..we all find that special someone who no one can replace..once in our life..i can feel the yearning in yor heart hugsss.. ~Vic |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
So sweetly given... Love and luck. ThisDiamond |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This one was written from the heart, Sue...and done very well. |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Hmmm... I don't quite know what to say to this. I like it, but I don't know what to say. Odd... Hope I may have the attitude you have if things go screwy for me. I want to die peacefully, in my sleep, like my grandfather, not screaming, terrified, like his passengers. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SmartChick~ Sweet Sue ... 'the impression I get' is that you need a great big *HUG* Love you sweet sister of my heart~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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