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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-03-13 09:48 PM

Unconditional
with compassion
feelings
trust

Given freely
wanting nothing
passionately
warmly
deeply

Unwavering
with strength
understanding
commitment

into eternal life

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2002-03-13 09:49 PM

It would seem 20 or less would be simple...but you've said so very much...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-03-13 09:52 PM

'Love' perfectly penned in twenty words!

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2002-03-13 09:54 PM

My Lady in White...

Tis true these words doth say mountains
whenst only a pebble has fallen to ground.
As love doth take from us many decisions
from whence true love can 'gain be found.

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

4 posted 2002-03-13 09:55 PM

Hello Barry

I think you've covered the lot here! Well done.

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2002-03-13 09:59 PM

Thank you Nancy...now if we could all just
remember all of this...and LOVE by it all
the time...Even I have failed from time to
time...being human...as I am...

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2002-03-13 10:00 PM

Thanx Sue...just a few of the many things
that make up the chemistry of love...

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

7 posted 2002-03-13 10:03 PM

Magnus...Beautiful and well thought-out poem about love. And, you said it all in 20 words.

***Ivy Rose

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-03-13 10:11 PM

YAY!!! Ooohhhhhh...this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, your words always say so much even when there are so few of them! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, loves magic fills your heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

9 posted 2002-03-13 10:20 PM

I see these 20 or less poems are becoming very popular on these blue pages,and you've penned an exquisite poem!
I must try one soon

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

10 posted 2002-03-13 10:22 PM

Barry~

BRAVO!! lovely words from you....and I too am enjoying these 20 or less writes....woohooo....be well...Peace

Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

11 posted 2002-03-13 10:24 PM

Nice thoughts. Barry.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

12 posted 2002-03-13 10:26 PM

Unconditional
That's the one word that seems to be so difficult to understand for some. Well done Magnus sweet poet!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

13 posted 2002-03-13 11:13 PM

Enjoyed your thoughts Magnus...James

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

14 posted 2002-03-13 11:45 PM

Wow. I'm very impressed. Wow!

I want to die peacefully, in my sleep, like my grandfather, not screaming, terrified, like his passengers.

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