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RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

0 posted 2002-03-13 05:23 PM

Through my window, I see the trees of the woods
The seclusion makes me miss my old neighborhood
I see my truck resting in the drive way
As the grass glistens on this hot, humid day

There is no pavement, just long, dirt roads
I keep staring out this window in zombie mode
Oh look, here comes the mail lady
Everday she hits my mailbox cause she drives so crazy

There's not much more to see outside this window
When it's dark out, the stars shine beautifully though
What else do I see? my reflection on the glass
I must go water my yard, and it's a tiring task

[This message has been edited by RosePetal (03-13-2002 10:08 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-03-13 05:26 PM

(sigh) Awwwwwwww, I know moving is a big step, but I know soon you will get used to your surroundings once you settle down then everything will seem so magical! (kiss on lips) I love you so much, sweet friend, I dream of seeing the stars with you this summer so so much! (kisses) I love you, my sweet Joanna!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2002-03-13 05:27 PM

i would love being alone in the country..i like my solace..enjoyed joanna..hugss ..
feel free to email me sometime hon..

~Vic

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2002-03-13 05:28 PM

RosePetal,
There is so much more to see, if you use your imagination. Enjoyed

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

4 posted 2002-03-13 05:56 PM

Hi Joanna, I love this, it made me feel as I wanted to be there, I love being alone and I would love to be out somewhere all alone, things are a bit hectic for me right now. anyway, good to see your smiling face, and I hope you like your new place. (except for the mail lady) LOL floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Hypnosis
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since 2001-12-02

Posts 325
CO

5 posted 2002-03-13 10:09 PM

Ah yes, moving can be a tiring task altogether, i have done this a few times when i was a young lad.  Well, maybe when you become more accostomed to your surroundings, you will see the real beauties of your new environment. Good luck in your new home!

    From your good friend
       Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

[This message has been edited by Hypnosis (03-13-2002 10:10 PM).]

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

6 posted 2002-03-13 10:12 PM

Awwwww Joanna~

there is a world out there to see, especially in the country....LOL there is country in FL?? tell me where....I just moved from MN and all I have seen, are rows of houses and the beach that had rocks...LOL I just got here bout a month and 1/2 ago, give or take....so i am still exploring....

Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-13-2002 10:13 PM).]

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-03-13 10:18 PM

Hi Joanna! Titia's Challenge has been well met in this very visual piece. Hope you are getting all settled in to your new place. You sure were missed...
and not just by Noah!

LOL
....Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

8 posted 2002-03-13 11:06 PM

Joanna, get your little self back down here to God's country!!

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

9 posted 2002-03-13 11:43 PM

I remember when I moved *shudders* Lovely poem here Joanna. Very lovely indeed!

I want to die peacefully, in my sleep, like my grandfather, not screaming, terrified, like his passengers.

PoetryIsLife

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since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

10 posted 2002-03-15 04:07 AM

From someone who has moved more times then I can remember....

I enjoy your style.... I loved the poem. Well done, my friend. SMoothly written and shaped. From a friend...

Thank you, too, for your friendship.

~ Titus

I'm dealing with too much.... I'm loosing control.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

11 posted 2002-03-15 06:33 AM

at least you get a mail lady *s... I enjoyed the view...I am sure it will grow in time...my window didn't have much to see yet either.

M

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

12 posted 2002-03-18 02:02 AM

I love to see all those different views from everyone's window.
Liked it a lot.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I

walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

13 posted 2002-03-18 04:46 PM

Love it.

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

14 posted 2002-03-19 09:56 PM

This got me thinking about what I see there, I like my geraniums that sit at the edge of the walkway in their own little corner of the sun. Maybe I will rise to the challenge.
Really nice picture outside your window RP~

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