»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #19
»
Anticipation
| Open Poetry #19 |
|
Anticipation |
|
|
mutington Member
since 2000-11-29
Posts 132New Jersey, USA |
Anticipation Tonight the nightengale refused to sing, The moon was covered by a thick dark cloud. I waited for the kisses you would bring, Then lips on lips our passions would unshroud. I paced and paced while chanting your sweet name. The pounding in my heart would not be still. Soft thoughts of all your tender love I'd claim, And fall beneath your spell with every thrill. Just then..I heard the nightengale's love song. The cloud began to move; the moon shined bright. Then through the door you strolled..so big, so strong, And lifted me into your arms of might. ..Oh yes my love, I've waited eagerly ..That we may share ourselves..so tenderly. Joyce O'Neal mutington/joyce |
||
| © Copyright 2002 Joyce E O'Neal - All Rights Reserved | |||
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
J Lady....beautifully written in your style. Always done so very tenderly and with soft passion... |
||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Joyce, A lovely tender write, enjoyed. |
||
Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"..Oh yes my love, I've waited eagerly ..That we may share ourselves..so tenderly"   (smiles) Wow, ooohhhhhh...this is such a gorgeous sonnet, sweet friend, you truly are a queen of sonnets, you always make me smile with the romance you write in this form! (kiss on cheek) May the voice of the nightingale forever serenade your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joyce, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
||
|
Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Wonderful to see your romantic writings again, Joyce |
||
|
Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Been awhile since I've seen you here...welcome again...nice to read you...  K |
||
|
mutington Member
since 2000-11-29
Posts 132New Jersey, USA |
Thank you all for these generous comments. joyce mutington/joyce |
||
|
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Joyce~ 'The pounding in my heart would not be still.' Isn't that just the greatest feeling ? Enjoyed very much~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
