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mirror man
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0 posted 2002-03-13 08:42 AM









magic


Byleth, je vous convoque
le roi de toutes ses forces,
montez votre cheval pale.
Byleth, je vous convoque
avec ma musique et
ma baguette du noisetier,
que je dirige sud est.
Je porte l'anneau argent
que je tiens en place
sous les yeux de face.
Je vous ords vous vous mettez
dedans le cercle et apportez
l'amour a la lune
au-desus de la mer.




Note: as long as he reads French
and can read my French,
you're OK.

© Copyright 2002 mirror man - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2002-03-13 10:23 AM


mirror man

She doesn't read French, yours or anyones..can you translate please?

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2 posted 2002-03-13 10:40 AM


Its beautiful....

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

SpitFire
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3 posted 2002-03-13 10:51 AM


~Oh my Mirror Man,...just read this, best as I could, sounds lovely, though I have no idea what it says, it does sound lovely. Would like to see this translated?,...would be funny if it weren't meant to sound lovely lol. *Peace you.
Soleil Noir
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4 posted 2002-03-13 11:06 AM



Ah, good, a study session,
something to give us with
absolutely nothing to do
some serious time in the
halls of books

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5 posted 2002-03-13 01:51 PM


Yes, c'est vraie. This is beautiful, and quite magical. Bien.
mirror man
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6 posted 2002-03-13 05:17 PM


Greeneyes -- thank you.  French is a beautiful language.

SpitFire -- yes, it could be funny.  I certainly hope so.

Soleil Noir -- thank you, but I make no guarantees about my French.  

Midnitesun -- yes, it seems to have worked.

Martie -- I will email you.

Mistletoe Angel
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7 posted 2002-03-13 06:42 PM




(smiles) Wow, oohhhhhh...I think I was able to make out this French in the most part, may you forever be the king her heart summons and may you forever summon the music of true love on the seashore with your love in the moonlight forever! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is enchanting! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

mirror man
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8 posted 2002-03-13 06:55 PM


Noah -- sounds good to me.  Thanks.
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