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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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rush hour thirty hump day animation bumper to bumper attitudes on their way to draw a draft at the outback or back-inn and cell phone vapors sculpture delineation of oblivion nukin’ what an amber ale don’t hammer edge emboss she is a cigar store dancer her perfume is havana heaven and hell o on tan tight rolled, firm, fixed fine works out 3 days a week goes to the bank sometimes the other 4 and discusses the genre of gothic styles and art of being legal and tender says she is into hemingway or robusto in terra cotta they are on the top shelf and only she can select them without taking her eyes off your lighter or keys or whatever that is there protuberant and attentive to her effortless expectation she wears valleys in her cream color can hold a punch braless while she leans and lights a fire with her hips in the mirror reflecting back, she says she has practiced that pose to make soft men into contented statuary she checks her hems and hers drives a benz a mile into ambiguity then back to vague simile copper and beige over cohiba tags and leather seats that smell like money and her lady friends' white shoulder recollection ©Dark |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This, sir, is not only top shelf, but first rate. I have ways of making this stay at the top! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Sunshine...thank you lady fair for your comments...and please put me (my words) close to your attention |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
THIS belongs on the top shelf where we all can admire it with shy eyed glances. Wonderful write sir. ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
most enchanting nancy you make me smile wickedly and sincere thank you |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
A very well-worded thought provoking piece... well done, Sir! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
most humble thanks Soleil |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, I just love the imagery you always put in your words, sweet friend, this is excellent and belongs front-row center on the top shelf where we all can read it! (smiles) Back up to the top you go, sweet friend, we all love you so much! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Noah, thank you for your comments |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I really do love the images you give my eyes to feast on....I will always love your poetry, and keep as much of it as I can |
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