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Masked Intruder

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since 1999-05-23

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Near golden sunsets

0 posted 2002-03-13 02:20 AM

She left me in the pouring rain
As the sun beat down from the sky.
She didn't cry as she sang her refrain,
Emptiness filled me with "Goodbye".

Those words, that death, my changing life;
I still find her face among the crowd.
The regret, the scorn, the bitter strife
of pushing against this dark rain cloud.

Endless nights I strive to forget
My love, my life...misunderstood.
Each morning I wake with new regret;
I still love her more than I should.

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2002-03-13 06:20 AM

This is a very powerful and emotive piece Phillip ... very nicely composed. Much enjoyed the way you captured the feeling of regret and remorse, well done.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

2 posted 2002-03-13 06:39 AM

phillip,

lots of longing emotion in this,
you display a powerful piece of
poetry here...excellent writing!

take care.
amy

"Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't
mean they don't love you with all they have"

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

3 posted 2002-03-13 07:21 AM

love brings its dose of pain, Phillip..unfortunate for us to feel
but fortunately that's how we grow...
well put, much enjoyed

Temptress

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since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

4 posted 2002-03-13 12:09 PM

Unfortunately, it is often this way for a very long while.

We heal, but never forget. You write so well, luv. Keep it up.

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

His Poet
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since 2001-12-18

Posts 750

5 posted 2002-03-13 12:15 PM

Very well written. I could feel the emotions pouring from each line. Really good work.
Cheryl

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-03-13 06:46 PM

(big hugggssssss) This is very bittersweet, dearest friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope in spite of the pain love can bring that now the love in your heart has grown stronger than ever in understanding! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Philip, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

7 posted 2002-03-13 10:00 PM

Emotional and a very good write. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

8 posted 2002-03-13 10:12 PM

Ahhh this one just aches!
Time will heal thankfully.
Good write.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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