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Can I be done now mommy?
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Can I be done now mommy? |
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inspiredpoetwriter Member
since 2002-01-05
Posts 104Minnesota |
=( :( :( R.I.P In Loving Memory of Eddie Fink Born Nov.12,96 Died Mar.6,2002 I Wrote this poem for him... 3/10/2002 Can I be done now mommy Can I go to heaven and rest Now? Can I be done now mommy? When will this pain end? Can I be done now mommy Can I go to heaven and rest Now? Can I be done now mommy? Can the tears fall now? Will we get to go home Now? Can I be done now mommy Can I go to heaven and rest Now? Can I be done now mommy? Can the memories in my Head flow? Can I be done now mommy Can I go to heaven and rest Now? Can I be done now mommy? Can I go dance with the angels? Can I hug you one last time Mommy? Can I be done now mommy Can I go to heaven and rest Now? Can I be done now mommy? Will I feel any pain? Will god be there waiting for me At the golden gate? Can I be done now mommy Can I go to heaven and rest Now? Can I be down now mommy? Will u be ok mommy? Don’t cry mommy Don’t forget me mommy I’m always in your heart Remember me Mommy. Can I be done now mommy Can I go to heaven and rest Now? =( :( :( ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥iM a PoEt WhO wRiTeZ Wit HeR Heart ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥ |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Oh that's so sad  Wonderful tribute. *hugs* I dont' know what else to say...I want to die peacefully, in my sleep, like my grandfather, not screaming, terrified, like his passengers. |
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Masked Intruder
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since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
I like the repitition, it adds to the character of the writing as well as the innocence of the writer. Well done. |
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