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Alicethruglass
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0 posted 2002-03-12 08:53 AM




Silent Write

My breath has been stolen,
a mystery to me.
In silent sketches, the mirror reflects
too much caring in shades of gray,
the true wealth of my aging.
Through this glass,
is held the framework of my hope,
the wavering of abandonment
remembering the days
when there was no wall to climb
and it was pointless to reach
for the reward of you,
when with each spin of the wheel,
your wonderings were mine.
I am past the tears,
venting through eyes on blank pages,
smiling, at the breadth of my heart,
knowing that within are seconds,
anytime your heart bleeds for more.

~A~

[This message has been edited by Alicethruglass (03-12-2002 08:54 AM).]

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-03-12 08:58 AM


Alicethruglass,
An interesting write and a good read.

Alicethruglass
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2 posted 2002-03-12 10:55 AM


Alice is the  "interesting" side of me...*s
Thank you

~A~

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3 posted 2002-03-13 12:10 PM




(sigh) Wow, this is wonderful, sweet friend, may all your heart desires to write come flying from your heart and onto the paper with smiles and inspiration always! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alice, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Alicethruglass
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4 posted 2002-03-13 05:48 AM


Thank you Noah, for your kind words.

~A~

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