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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-03-12 11:20 PM


I Really Miss You Jin

Lovely pieces of your heart
flow to me warm and tenderly
each time you call and say
soft sweet words to me.
I love to hear you say
"James how was your day?"
I know before each call is through
once more I'll hear sweet words of love
like "James I really love you."
And then I know that I will say
"Jin I love you too."
For these words come straight from
my heart and they are really true.
And when our converstation is drawing
to an end I always find myself saying
"I really miss you Jin."

JamesLee
March12
2002


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1 posted 2002-03-12 11:24 PM


James,

    It's so hard when you miss someone. Believe me, I know the feeling.
    Wonderful write

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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2 posted 2002-03-12 11:39 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful and a little sad, sweet friend, I know just how you feel, for I too have these feelings right now but I know you and Jin will meet soon and love each other forever! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-03-12 11:49 PM


James - Nicely done.  Hopefully, the distance between you two becomes shorter very soon.

Dave

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4 posted 2002-03-13 12:01 PM


Very sweet James..and touching too..that is very sweet of her to care about your day..can be very torturous missing someone you love..hugs

          ~Victoria

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2002-03-13 01:13 AM


Thank you Tara, Noah, Laura and Victoria for you nice comments...
Yes missing someone can be sad but also it is very awesome to know that someone you really care for also cares for you...and although I miss her the times we are apart I love the times we spend together...Love can be very sweet...James

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6 posted 2002-03-13 06:58 AM


James,

this was a beautiful poem and it
really hit home for me...my girlfriend
and i are apart too about 1000 miles
apart, and it's very sad and hard yes...
but in my opinion yes, it's worth it!
i hope you and Jin get to be together soon.
until then, take care of one another!

amy

"Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't
mean they don't love you with all they have"

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2002-03-17 12:28 PM


Thank you for your nice response amy...James
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