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ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
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0 posted 2002-03-12 09:56 PM



will you get off my back
get right on that track
get the ball rolling each line
get to rhyme it every time

get up in the morning, wash that face
get dressed, gotta beat that race
get combed, get dressed, late today?
get going, get in the car, get away.

get straight to the point
get along with the joint
get over your cold
get into new molds.

get off your bum
get down and drum,
get to your seat
get into a beat.

get through and contend
get around the bend,
get with it
get a life!


© Copyright 2002 Martin Dansky - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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1 posted 2002-03-12 10:02 PM


ABSOlutely! I'm up to the challenge my friend...This is the top of the roller coaster, with bells on!
Let's do dis ting...ThisDiamond

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
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2 posted 2002-03-12 10:40 PM


Diamond,

Have been to your poetry site and find
one of your poems neat, especially the one
that defines terms in a playful way


GenXer
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since 2001-12-15
Posts 583
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3 posted 2002-03-12 10:42 PM


Martin - This poem begets a response.  That second stanza was painful, because that is what I do every morning Monday through Friday. Just the thought of waking up early in the morning makes me cringe.  

Dave

ecrivan
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4 posted 2002-03-12 10:52 PM


oops sorry Dave, I cringe too sometimes...and New York is the city that never sleeps!


ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
5 posted 2002-03-12 11:05 PM


Hello,
Just wanted to make sure you knew that I apologize for messing up the challenge.
I GET it now...just wanted to dance
ThisDiamond

ecrivan
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6 posted 2002-03-12 11:12 PM


Why that's okay Diamond, I even wrote a poem with you in mind called 'Ode to Diamond's Sax'!

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (03-12-2002 11:18 PM).]

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