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catalinamoon
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0 posted 2002-03-12 09:52 PM


I need to feel the magic touch
the one that heals me oh so much.
I need to hear the fairies sing
A peaceful joy they always bring.

I need a crystal warm and strong
the magic has been gone too long.
I need the roaring of the sea
the proof of continuity.

I'd even wish to see an elf
a wonder for my mental health
But most of all, my candles red
to prove to me I am not dead.

© Copyright 2002 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2002-03-12 09:54 PM


To protect the inner spark as if it is the only light in the forest...
Nicely done. Good wishes. ThisDiamond

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2 posted 2002-03-12 09:56 PM




(sigh) This is sooooooo beautiful and filled with yearning, sweet friend, I hope soon you find all the magic your heart desires and love will forever sigh in you! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-03-12 09:58 PM


Oh, you are quite alive and resilient dear Sandra. Take heart poetess!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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4 posted 2002-03-12 09:59 PM


Sandra,
Magic indeed. And you deserve even more. May you get your wish.

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5 posted 2002-03-12 10:06 PM


Ah!  I shall wave my magic wand and cast a spell in a more, um, southerly direction?  

*Everyone in the way please duck so this can reach Sandra*

~Hugs to you sweet lady...Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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6 posted 2002-03-12 10:27 PM


And now hear this, ye spirits of the deep
A spell goes out to Sandra as she sleeps
In a new dance we'll step for love, anew
And call romance to her, forever true.

And may her prince be ever kind and pure
A love for her to evermore endure
And let the gods of earth and heaven know
That they should burn romance in fiery glow.

And let it be that any selfish man
Taking advantage without God's Loving hand
Will die a death of gruesome cruel fate
As all the gods of love do bless her wait.

And grant Sandra the finest and kindest love of heaven's store.

Let it be.

((Sandra))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Tracey
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7 posted 2002-03-12 10:30 PM


Yeah, if you find that magic, send some of it this way too…get me out of this mood I’m in!! (and hey, I don’t need to see an elf to wonder about my mental health!! Lol)

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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8 posted 2002-03-12 10:32 PM


i knew you would be back again real soon..nicely done hon ...hugs

             ~Victoria

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9 posted 2002-03-12 10:39 PM


~Such soft wishing Sandra,...and it has been gone too long, may your candle continue to burn light until it's full return. This grabs me. *Peace S.
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10 posted 2002-03-12 11:44 PM


To write like this, you surely cannot be dead.  Really liked this one, probably because I could relate to it.  Nicely done.

Dave

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11 posted 2002-03-13 07:01 AM


Sandra-

this is a lovely write...
magic is a wonderful thing! you did
a beautiful job at putting what i think
we all feel or have felt at one time into
words! take care.

amy

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mean they don't love you with all they have"

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12 posted 2002-03-13 08:47 AM


Very good.  Best wishes.
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13 posted 2002-03-13 09:06 AM


The magic is within you else you could not pen such a piece as this

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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14 posted 2002-03-13 09:43 AM


catalinamoon,


    I like this

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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15 posted 2002-03-13 01:47 PM


Me too! This is really a good poem, Sandra. Magically penned. LOL at Nancy waving her wand at you, and asking the rest of us to duck.
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16 posted 2002-03-14 12:03 PM


Magic you say?  Here you go Sandra.  I hope your wishes come true too.
  
~Bibbity Bobbity Boo~

The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives.
  ~* Albert Einstein *~

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17 posted 2002-03-14 08:07 AM


We could all use a little magic, sometimes.
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18 posted 2002-03-15 03:33 PM


I liked this very much... and if you get magic to spare, put my name on the list. *S*
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19 posted 2002-03-15 04:45 PM


Magic you say, Hmmmmmmm. Well now here is some magic for you Catalina dear.

"I need the roaring of the sea
the proof of continuity."

Now there is magic. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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20 posted 2002-03-15 05:02 PM


Blowing a little fairie dust your way
to hopefully brighten up your day,
to see the smile of Catalinamoon
return to her beautiful face soon.

Hugs and hope that dust reaches you.
Donna

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (03-15-2002 05:03 PM).]

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21 posted 2002-03-15 05:14 PM


You are all so sweet, I think magic is alive and well at Passions.
S

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