Open Poetry #19 |
Multiplying Love |
Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Multiplying Love By Larry Chadwick I took a chance, And gave you my heart. It was worth the risk, Right from the start. I forgot that in return, You’d trust me with yours. More risk than I knew, Love filling my pores. This investment I’ve made, In the future of us, Pays dividends so grand, I think it’s a must. So now that I’m rich, And loaded with love, Let’s see it multiply, With a gift from above. Let’s do the math, Of me times you. Which equals three, With a baby too. If only we could, Conceive tonight. Then for sure, It would be just right. March 12, 2002 Everybody thinks of changing humanity and nobody thinks of changing himself. Leo Tolstoy |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
You sound so happy here. This is a positively real love poem. And thanks for your note on my poem. Sandra. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hey Larry I loved this one - very cute and so well written. Vintage Larry I'd have to say! Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well, whatever you're planning isn't going to happen with you sitting at the computer! |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Hey, you looking for more babies Larry???? Geez, don’t you know they don’t move out of the house til they’re 30 these days??? Better you than me pal!! Lol. Nice write of love though. And I love Sunshines comment!! If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Larry darling boy this is outstanding writing, and so full of love, this is such a special and magical wonder. What can I say except this is utterly wonderful. Beautiful writing, excellent thoughts, I love this one, it’s excellent, now enjoy Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sandra, Thanks for the thanks. And thanks for being here...I like your work too. Sue, Thank you so very much for being a faithful friend! Karilea, All right wisenhymer! What are you the romance police? Geesh. Tracey, And as for you smartie pants...the word was "could". Shootin' blanks don't count. ROTFLMAO Everybody thinks of changing humanity and nobody thinks of changing himself. Leo Tolstoy |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Mushy, Sweetie I'll never tire of your presence. Thanks. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
LOL@Sunshine's comment! You really want more kids Larry!? You're a braver man than I am...er, I mean woman....no...than I am a woman. Know what? I think I am tired...and I had better go find my pillow...fast! Enjoyed.....hugs....nite. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I think that is something you can handle quite well...James |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love the gorgeous words of love you write! (smiles) You are a wonderful friend and parent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you!' Love, Noah Eaton |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
James, If it were an option. I'd do it in a heart beat! Thanks. Noah, Hey...I appreciate that a bunch. Thanks. Everybody thinks of changing humanity and nobody thinks of changing himself. Leo Tolstoy |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Larry, your happiness shines through on the page and its a glorious thing to see! i hope you are always just this happy and that you are able to have a child. take care of yourself, and thanks for posting such a lovely write! take care. amy "Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh this one is full of love and promise and the wonder of a future together. Very well done. Nan |
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mutington Member
since 2000-11-29
Posts 132New Jersey, USA |
It's always a pleasure to read a poem that speaks so tenderly.. ..very beautiful, very refreshing! mutington/joyce |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
If 1 and 1 are 3 then how can 1 and 1 be 4? Or is it, 1 and 1 is 3 plus 1 is 4? Or is it ... Oh, who cares. Go forth and multiply Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Now this was so sweet larry, Like changing diapers do you? haha, good one I enjoyed it much. floria Floria |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Larry~ You are kidding right??? LOL I agree with Tracey, they dont leave until they are 30....but I would'nt know that, being 30 myself with two little ones at home....re think this bud....those long nights can be an eye opener....LOL of course I am having fun here...as Interloper said GO forth and multiply..... Greeneyes~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-13-2002 06:19 PM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
I'm shooting blanks!!! amy, Sorry, but must clarify. I have two kids and two step-kids and would love to have had ten more! But thanks. Nan, Thank you so much! mutington, Very kind words indeed, from you! Thanks. Interloper, ROFL I did get busted. I though nobody noticed. Love the instructions... floria, None of it intimidates me! Kids are worth everything you know. Thanks. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lauren, Too funny! Kidding...a pun! And there is no price to high, however, no amount of practice will help. And thanks for the instructions. I'll do my best. LOL |
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