Open Poetry #19 |
Lips Of A Rose (Twenty Or Less) |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(For my love Joanna) Lips Of A Rose By: Noah Eaton 3/12/02 Lips of a rose Brush down my skin Consuming passion Touching brightly Flaring With scarlet flame Seducing me Embracing Heavenly love [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-12-2002 03:16 PM).] |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Noah, I like Short and sweet. I'm sure Joanna will love it Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Short, sweet and romantic. I hope she enjoys |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Noah darling boy this is utterly utterly wonderful writing. Joanna I’m sure will be smiling in her heart with the gift of this. Absolutely excellent writing from you. Short and filled with wondrous love Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Noah darling boy this is utterly utterly wonderful writing. Joanna I’m sure will be smiling in her heart with the gift of this. Absolutely excellent writing from you. Short and filled with wondrous love Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Says alot in just a few words..nicely done Noah...hugss ~Vic |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
She'll like this one.. Good write Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lovely Noah!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
How pretty! "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very nicely done Noah! I'm sure Joanna will love it... sometimes fewer words say is just as well. Hugs. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
short, sweet and wonderful. You say so much with so few words. She will love it. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Short and wonderful. Just right! ((Noah)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Oh yes, I definitely love this! I never thought I could mean so much to someone! Thank u |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Noah, I cannot wait to read your words to her AFTER you meet. Sandra |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
How well you honor of the love that sustains you. A knight to the lady Joanna. ThisDiamond |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Noah - Very good. Heck, I'd take the lips of a dandelion at this point.lol Dave |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing Noah...James |
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