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Krissy
Senior Member

since 2002-02-22

Posts 556
kent England

0 posted 2002-03-11 11:48 AM

Unspoken Whispers

How can so much be said
Without a word being spoken
From the touch of your fingertips
I’ve heard your breath
Whispering along paths
Of my longing
Speak of love, of joy, delight
Passing over my skin
In touch of voiceless
Desire

Intimate details whispered
Stroking through my heart’s soul
Passed between mind and body
In an exchange of spirit
For sensations which quicken
The blood before
Pooling into heated seas
Of sensations felt and heard
Though not said
Heat

I hear your words unspoken
Feel them flowing in
A river of liquid thought
Into my soul’s being
That which is and becomes
Part of you in this merging
Joined united
Silent communication
Of touch alone
Love

Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

1 posted 2002-03-11 11:54 AM

A precious gem this one is...
Beautiful expression PoetFriendKrissy...
*~coco~*

N orth Carolina Girl
Senior Member

since 2001-12-04

Posts 962
NC,USA

2 posted 2002-03-11 12:00 PM

Krissy,I can see you have your mama`s talent.BEAUTIFUL POEM!

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2002-03-11 01:15 PM

Very lovely indeed Krissy..enjoyed..hugs

~Victoria~

"Mistakes are the portals of discovery."
-- James Joyce

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2002-03-11 02:22 PM

Whispering along paths
Of my longing
======================
I NEED this phrase ... may I have it

Lovely write, indeed!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-03-11 02:55 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, such words of love and passion shine from your heart that I know will touch your lovers heart forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krissy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

6 posted 2002-03-11 04:59 PM

Krissy,

This is so stunning .. I love it Krissy

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

7 posted 2002-03-11 06:17 PM

Krissy you are writing so well dear girl. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2002-03-11 10:04 PM

Krissy...you should be very proud of yourself
for all of your poetry....but especially so
for this poem....exceptional...very much
so...

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

9 posted 2002-03-11 10:16 PM

Forgive me for repeating everyone, Krissy...
but I think you are a natural at poetry.

((hugggsss))

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

10 posted 2002-03-12 12:03 PM

Krissy~

Desire, Heat, and Love make the passion, and fuel the unspoken whispers....Lovely

Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-12-2002 12:04 AM).]

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

11 posted 2002-03-12 06:53 AM

Krissy, what a stunning poem. Very beautiful.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

12 posted 2002-03-12 10:24 AM

Krissy~
EXQUISITE ! !

You are 'in-touch' ...

'From the touch of your fingertips
I’ve heard your breath
Whispering along paths
Of my longing'

Doesn't get much prettier than this thought~
Keep 'listening' sweet poetess~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

13 posted 2002-03-12 10:59 AM

What Marge said. *S* This is beautiful, Krissy... The title begged me to listen... I'm glad I did. *S*

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

14 posted 2002-03-12 09:04 PM

Krissy-

beautiful writing sweetie! this is
just so lovely. i love your style
and grace. you do have a gift i think
and im so glad you are continuing to
post. i look forward to reading more
from you. take care.

amy

"Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't
mean they don't love you with all they have"

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

15 posted 2002-03-12 09:18 PM

This is well expressed with grace and this is sensuality and beauty at it's finest! The first and last stanzas are stunning!

This is a keeper

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

16 posted 2002-03-12 09:45 PM

Now just how many days ago was I reading that this young lady was saying, "who, me? A poet? Nah, I'm not a poet, I'm just someone who my mother drug in here to read about all of her friends..."

Good to see that some of us are rubbing off on you!

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (03-12-2002 09:45 PM).]

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

17 posted 2002-03-12 10:17 PM

Krissy, this is sooo sensual. What a beauty you wrote here.
Sandra

GenXer
Senior Member

since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

18 posted 2002-03-12 10:37 PM

Krissy - Very passionate write. Nicely done.

Dave

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

19 posted 2002-03-12 10:53 PM

I have to say very, very nice...James

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