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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2002-02-16 03:28 PM

I held you all night
In my arms
A passionate memory
Pressed to my heart,
You and I
In moonlight
Dancing to
An unheard melody

On shores
Of ecstasy
We made love,
In complete
Rapture, our heart
And soul were
One, such beauty
To speak so softly

Lay upon my skin, your
Sweet words,
Drink of my waters
In tranquility
Bare yourself to this thirst
Surrender

In echo’s of color,
Waltzing on
Frail glass
As seasons rise and fall

I lay beside you

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-16-2002 04:34 PM).]

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2002-02-16 03:39 PM

Lauren,
I surrender! Wow. No end on your horizon of romance. I like that.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-02-16 03:40 PM

(smiles) Ooohhhhhhhh...I love it, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me smile! (kiss on cheek) May love forever offer you the most gorgeous smiles, sweet freind, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2002-02-16 03:43 PM

Greeneyes - At times I find myself at a loss for words to say in reply to your writings. They are very romantic and deep...

BC

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

4 posted 2002-02-16 03:50 PM

This is so romantic, Lauren...I can picture a couple all dressed up and dancing to soft music...and then sleeping all night in each other's arms.....such beauty, you write!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

5 posted 2002-02-16 04:06 PM

Lauren, this is magnificent, my friend.

I'm keeping it. *hugs*

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2002-02-16 04:10 PM

Greeneyes,
Very nice, enjoyed

Wanda
Member

since 2001-10-23

Posts 461

7 posted 2002-02-16 04:28 PM

Greeneyes; You have a tremendously talented pen for poetry. Beautifully written. Wanda

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

8 posted 2002-02-16 04:46 PM

Lauren the beauty that you hold in your soul shines through your words dear friend....and like a fine wine just keeps getting better with time. As always, love your words hon. *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2002-02-16 05:57 PM

Lovely Lauren as always...very romantic.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me~

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

10 posted 2002-02-16 06:02 PM

Lauren, I am captured by your sweet words of ecstay. I am speechless.

((Lauren))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

11 posted 2002-02-16 06:11 PM

The imagery is wonderful, and I applaud you for it! Well done!

angel girl
Member

since 1999-07-23

Posts 322
within a whisper...

12 posted 2002-02-16 06:19 PM

Awww how sweet and romantic. Thank you for sharing. I very much enjoyed it.

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

13 posted 2002-02-16 06:45 PM

Lauren dear, wonderful sensitive writing, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

texasrose
Member

since 2001-10-24

Posts 146

14 posted 2002-02-17 09:46 AM

A lovely and touching write. Thank you.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

15 posted 2002-02-17 09:53 AM

Beautiful words Lauren...always enjoy them..alway very tender and soft..hugs

~Vic

"Silence is a friend who
will never betray."
— Confucius

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

16 posted 2002-02-18 05:20 PM

thanks to one and all, and forgive me for not respondng to each of you.....Love to all....

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

17 posted 2002-02-19 12:08 PM

Echoes of colors indeed!!
My thoughts have brightened
from the traditional Midnight Blue
to starbursts and rainbows!

Its always a pleasure to read into your eyes!!

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

18 posted 2002-02-19 06:41 AM

In echo’s of color,
Waltzing on
Frail glass
As seasons rise and fall

I lay beside you

I love this..the whole verse..but this is like....My Fair Lady..with her hair down. Wonderful!

Sincerely,
Regina

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