Frozen Love (The return of RosePetal)

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RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

0 posted 2002-03-12 12:56 PM

Some things are so tough to grasp
Like love, and what makes it last?
Does everyone truly deserve it?
What if the freezer could be used to preserve it?

The symbol of love dies
Like long stem red roses
A pair of eyes cry
Love's scent isn't for all noses?

Lovers wish upon the stars
While others opt for magic potion
I'll just offer you my heart
By chance, these sparks will lead to explosion

My love for you flows in more ways than one
It's thawed out from the cold and survived desert sun
I know you're not big on affection
Just know I'll be there like funhouse mirror reflections

To last forever seems like a fairytale
That just wont come true for me
Our history will never reach the trash pail
As long as you walk with me through love's journey

[This message has been edited by RosePetal (03-12-2002 01:08 PM).]

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

1 posted 2002-03-12 01:24 PM

Joanna darling girl this is utterly outstanding, you are an absolute mistress at writing these wonderful and perfectly constructed poems. As always I love it, and you knew I was going to say that.

You really are an excellent writer, and you fit right in my library. Utterly utterly perfect

Welcome back darling heart and this is truly wonderful, absolutely ace

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Accordionmaid
Member

since 2001-10-28

Posts 153
MA/USA

2 posted 2002-03-12 01:26 PM

A great poem, words put together well!

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

3 posted 2002-03-12 01:28 PM

Beautiful poem...glad you're back!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-03-12 01:48 PM

YAY!!! Ooohhhhhhh...this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love you so so much and love may never be meant to be a fairytale but it is always enchanting! (kiss on lips) I love you, my sweet Gwenevere, I am so happy you're back! (kisses)

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-12-2002 01:48 PM).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-03-12 01:51 PM

Joanna!! All I can say is, HI !!.......and,
THANKGOODNESSYOUAREBACK!!!

~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

6 posted 2002-03-12 02:12 PM

Welcome back, we missed you. Great poem.

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

7 posted 2002-03-12 02:18 PM

Joanne,
Welcome back sweetie! Good to see you haven't lost your touch.

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

8 posted 2002-03-12 02:30 PM

Joanna,

It's about time you get your behind back here

*chuckles* It's good to see your name up here again

Welcome back chickie!

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

9 posted 2002-03-12 02:56 PM

JOanna,
I enjoyed this very much.the flow was smooth and I love the use of imagery.Glad you are back.

Peaches

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

10 posted 2002-03-12 04:14 PM

Joanna, this is lovely. Welcome back home.

Michael

Stars will shine when I am gone
Earth will spin on as before
Gulls still race along the shore
Morning star, still kiss the dawn

~ M. Auguste

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

11 posted 2002-03-12 05:34 PM

Welcome Home, I hope the move was successful, and you are adusting to your new home.....good to read your words again, and this is ever so lovely and longing.....

Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-12-2002 05:34 PM).]

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

12 posted 2002-03-12 05:38 PM

Welcome back hon..i know someone is very happy to see your return haa..hope you are enjoying your new home..hugss

~Vic

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

13 posted 2002-03-12 11:32 PM

To last forever seems like a fairytale
That just wont come true for me
Our history will never reach the trash pail
As long as you walk with me through love's journey

Whoa....

Rose, I love it! Wonderfully done. Powerful emotions and feelings come through. A beautifully crafted love poem. Looking forward to more, my friend.

~ Titus

Will I ever forget what happened today?

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