Open Poetry #19 |
Fit (Word Usage Challenge) |
ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Fit for a king's table all dressed and garnished fit for a horsman's stable all groomed and harnessed fit for the matron's hall all maintained and selected fit for her ladies on call all prepared and protected fit when you lose inches about the waist far from fit when you wither and waste fit you describe when the scale returns a favour fit you become when you consume less sweet flavours. A fit you could throw if you don't get your way; it was fit for a king's table, not fit to stay. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (03-12-2002 11:10 PM).] |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
A fit you say A fit you play A fit you sow A fit I throw, just because your fits fit my mood. I like 'em ((ecrivan)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
like throwing a fit too sometimes got to stay fit though, does that fit?thanks for clicking in [This message has been edited by ecrivan (03-11-2002 09:32 PM).] |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Nice use of words, Martin....this shows the versatility of the English language. Great job! copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
BRAVO!!! Ooohhhhhh...this is wonderful, sweet friend, yep, that word certainly does have a lot of meanings! Wow, oh my gosh, this would make a fabulous poetry challenge; we find a word with multiple meanings or syntax and write a poem using each meaning! (big hugggssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! We all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
martin darling boy this is utterly outstanding, you are an absolute master at writing these wonderful and perfectly constructed poems. As always I love it, and you knew I was going to say that. You really are an excellent writer, and you fit right in my library. Utterly utterly perfect As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Martin - Hopefully, I can fit a reply in here, because this poem is sure fit for one. Enjoyed! Dave |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
So be it Noah, the challenge is on for other words that have multiple meanings, looks like Dave has the lead! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Wait I think Marsha and Silver fit in there too, she's fit to match Dave on a fit challenge..hehe!may the competition begin with poems based on words having multiple meanings or syntax! [This message has been edited by ecrivan (03-12-2002 03:33 PM).] |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Noah, thanks for your suggestion on the word challenge, but where is everybody! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Lyra, That's the great thing about the English language, so much to work with!glad you liked this. |
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