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Silver Streak
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0 posted 2002-03-12 09:13 AM


My river - inspired by Dark Stranger's poem, "river time"

"There is a river whose streams make glad the city of God,
the holy place where the Most High dwells. " NIV Psalms 46:4

My river
quivers
ever falling
stalling
into ease.

And then
when
my river flows
just goes
into seas

Fusing
oozing
into God's
ocean
breeze.

I rest.

My river.

Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher
Silver Streak of Silver Springs, Florida
March 12, 2002

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Interloper
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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2002-03-12 09:24 AM


Beautiful my friend.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast
2 posted 2002-03-12 11:13 AM


yes Silver..you do share the water
of life there
well done and thank you

Silver Streak
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3 posted 2002-03-12 11:56 AM


Thank you, Interloper.

((Interloper))
-newell

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Silver Streak
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4 posted 2002-03-12 11:57 AM


Thank you, Dark Stranger.

((Dark Stranger))
-Silver

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Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-03-12 04:49 PM




WOW!!! Ooohhhhh...this is wonderful, sweet friend, I too see all our hearts as rivers, all meeting in the confluence of the ocean of our dearest Lord, which stretches with infinite miles of truth and Love! (big hugggsssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Newell, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Silver Streak
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6 posted 2002-03-12 04:54 PM


Thank you sweet Noah for your loving thoughts.

((Noah))
-newell

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Startime
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since 2000-10-03
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7 posted 2002-03-12 05:01 PM


*sigh* my river moves slow..filled with all the dreams my heart can weave....**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02
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FL, USA
8 posted 2002-03-12 05:08 PM


Thank you, Karen. Ah! To be slowly floating down a river watching all God's wonderful creations, listening to the birds and sounds of the forest. It is wonderful! And here in Central Florida, we have many beautiful lttle clear rivers winding through tropical settings. I invite you to come and float along with me. Slowly.

((Karen))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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