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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Olympus Mons I am susceptible to your violent moves, almost alive around you. You would make me your volcano, emptying me until I am mute and dumb. Yet, you remain a stone, a lost, lifeless moon, wanting revolution. © 2002 Corinne Bailey |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Wow, this is very emotionally powerful, sweet friend, your words erupt with such emphasis of emotion! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Corinne, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Corinne....interesting thoughts. A good start. Bob |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Corinne, Good one, I enjoyed |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks, Noah, Bob and Sey! Cor |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
How I love the way you write, Corinne... I relate to this... but it gets me thinkin far beyond. Have you been published? Have you tried? If you had a book of poems, I'd buy it (and I own one book of poetry...) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I'd probably be right behind Elizabeth Corinne. . . wonderfully done. . . almost. . . alien in a sort of way. . .  ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
oh yes..great descriptions Corinne..hugs ~Vic "Mistakes are the portals of discovery." |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Oh, Elizabeth Cor, you've made my week! Thank you. Have had a few published, have not tried in a year or so. Sven, Victoria, thank you very much! Cor |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ I LIKE this ! ! Poignantly moving piece~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you kindly, Marge! Cor |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Corinne, you continue to say things in ways no one else would even consider....this one is orbital |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
you make the mind pivot with thought as the reader dances to your words most enjoyable, Corinne. tSR |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I love it when you read my mind, and then put my thoughts into words I never could. Outstanding. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Amazing. |
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