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This Is the Love
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This Is the Love |
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Moonlight Romeo 
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
This is the love I have for you, A blazing sun in sky of blue, These diamond stars and fullest moon, Songs of love sung in choir's tune. This is the love that's in my heart, Painted in red, a work of art With strokes drawn by brush so fine, This is the love of a lifetime. It's of love for you that I write The sun by day and moon by night. And when ink is gone from this pen, Hands will write, again and again, I love you, I love you I do This is the love I have for you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I know your love will forever love you the way you do too and will always cherish what your heart has to offer her! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet romeo, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
This is wonderfully romantic thankyou for sharing it with us. I loved the rythmn you used and the imagery that you managed to capture in this poem. Andrew "The pin didn't drop it came and crashed down" |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Oh this is so beautiful! The flow and rythm were just perfect! Thanks for the awesome read! I want to die peacefully, in my sleep, like my grandfather, not screaming, terrified, like his passengers. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Romeo, this is a beautiful profession of your love to her. floria Floria |
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