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Interloper
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0 posted 2002-03-11 02:04 PM



I gave you my all
you took it and walked away
now another shares

Inspired by:Out of Giving

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2002 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
Silver Streak
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1 posted 2002-03-11 02:09 PM


This I do believe
Ask and we always recieve
Often much better.

When We Ask.

((Interloper))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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2 posted 2002-03-11 02:12 PM


I gave of myself
you took so greedily
now I give to me

~or~

I gave all to you
worshiping with every kiss
now it's me you miss

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3 posted 2002-03-11 02:15 PM


Yes, but I only walked away to refill my coffee cup.
Thank you, dear friend, for the link to Balladeer's poem. You never fail to shine your light on the good things in life.

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4 posted 2002-03-11 02:16 PM


Newell ~
Thanks

SEA ~
you better my work
yet I do not resent you
I love you for it
and if I keep saying that
I will soon start to believe
                        
I love ya, gal

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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5 posted 2002-03-11 02:18 PM


Midnitesun ~
It is easy when the poet has the talent to inspire such as me


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (03-11-2002 02:24 PM).]

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6 posted 2002-03-11 02:20 PM


you too

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7 posted 2002-03-11 02:47 PM




YAY!!! Ooohhhhhh..this is wonderful, sweet friend, I just love your wonderful senryus and how they portray all the angles of relationships, both happily and sadly! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is superb! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Interloper, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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8 posted 2002-03-11 02:52 PM


font>Kewl.


Admiring you at Passions.

[This message has been edited by BrightStar (03-11-2002 02:54 PM).]

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9 posted 2002-03-11 02:59 PM


SEA ~
Ain't it grand

Noah~
You are such a good friend and faithful reader.  Thank you from the bottom of my heart

BrightStar ~
Thank you.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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10 posted 2002-03-11 03:20 PM


Nobody does it like you Interloper...nobody!
You seem to dash these off with such ease...
Wonderful! Hugs.

~Sometimes all you really wish for...
     is someone to wish for you.~

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11 posted 2002-03-11 03:27 PM


...a perfect compliment to my little piece, sir. It certainly does seem to work that way, doesn't it? Sadly for them, the best things they can't take...it stays with us and they forfeit the right to it...at least that's a little consolation
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12 posted 2002-03-11 06:46 PM


Enchantress ~
You're turning my head (more, more )

Balladeer ~
You made it too easy my friend.  And, yes ... their loss.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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