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Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

0 posted 2002-03-03 11:27 PM

Hollow moon hidden light
Shining weakly through the night
Obscured by clouds in my mind
What I know is hard to find
I lost it once is it happening again?
I feel like I'm going 'round the bend
Hollow moon hidden light
Come back soon into my sight
Make my choice crystal clear
Bring the one who loves me near
Let me feel his touch so soft
Let him prove the words he's said so oft'

Now that my little bout with jealousy is over with...

Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

1 posted 2002-03-03 11:47 PM

Very nicely done, skyfire. I like the thought of a hollow Moon and the light of hidden thoughts. ***Ivy Rose

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

2 posted 2002-03-04 01:41 AM

there is love for us all, just takes time

well done.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2002-03-04 09:20 AM

Hollow moon hidden light
Come back soon into my sight
Make my choice crystal clear
Bring the one who loves me near
Let me feel his touch so soft
Let him prove the words he's said so oft'
==================================

I had to read this just for the beautiful title...the imagery is lovely...and that last lines impact is pure poetry.
Wonderful writing poetess Skyfire.

So it seems your saving grace was only saving face,
you thought he was wanting you...
but he was only wanting you to let him off the hook.

~BNL~

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

4 posted 2002-03-04 09:23 AM

Skyfire darling girl this is sooooooooo incredibly wonderful. I am never disappointed by the artistry and wonder you craft into your poems and this is amazing. You know that this is utterly wonderful don’t you, the flow is just perfect

Truly sensational writing, beauty is always welcome darling girl and YOU bring so much of it

Bravi Bravi Bravissimi

Thank you for this wonderful poem it’s utterly utterly wonderful
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

5 posted 2002-03-04 09:54 AM

sometimes people call it jealousy but i think its just that we dont like to be made a fool of.. thats all..

nicely done..enjoyed skyfire..

~Victoria~

"Mistakes are the portals of discovery."
-- James Joyce

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

6 posted 2002-03-10 08:55 AM

Whoa, you were jealous? DUDE! Don't be jealous.

The piece is nicely written though, Rhonda. Just the right amount of sincerity mixed in with a well worked rhyme.

Thanks for sharing. I look forward to rummaging around and finding more of your writing.

~AF~

"Sometimes the only way to stay sane is to go a little crazy." - Susanna Kaysen

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

7 posted 2002-03-10 09:34 AM

Wow I love this, Hollow moon,Hidden light. What a nice thought, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2002-03-10 09:36 AM

You have managed this very well...

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2002-03-10 10:54 AM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I too think that we can all relate to this feeling where we just want to confess how we feel to another but it just doesn't feel like the time! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rhonda, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2002-03-10 11:03 AM

enjoyed

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

11 posted 2002-03-10 01:06 PM

Doesn't it feel good to ditch that old raggedy cloak of jealousy? KUDOS to you girl. Nicely written poem, with spunk and positivity.

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

12 posted 2002-03-10 01:32 PM

Skyfire - Very nice. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

13 posted 2002-03-10 09:56 PM

This sounds like it should be chanted round a fire. Very catchy kind of rhythm.
Sandra

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

14 posted 2002-03-11 05:29 PM

As usual it is a pleasure to read your beautiful poetry thanks for sharing.

Andrew

"The pin didn't drop it came and crashed down"

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

15 posted 2002-03-11 06:07 PM

Very beautiful, Skyfire.

((Skyfire))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

16 posted 2002-03-11 07:08 PM

Skyfire, very very nicely done.
Wonderful rhythm in this piece.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Sometimes all you really wish for...
is someone to wish for you.~

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