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Remembering
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Remembering Each time before falling asleep, the path of your touch places a warmth of memory, that was gone too soon, leaving me now to bathe in weakness of thought. Penned up inside are the words never to see ink, resting silently, collections of the incomplete, poems awaiting their renaissance. Remembering... [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (03-11-2002 02:52 PM).] |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Nakdthoughts, good write  Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Penned up inside are the words never to see ink, resting silently, collections of the incomplete, ======================== so much said in so few perfect poetic words. a bittersweet beautiful write poetess Maureen. jm You never knew what I loved in you, |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Wonderful, Maureen! In silent moments "a time to tear and a time to mend, a time to be silent and a time to speak," NIV Ecclesiastes 3:7 Ah! Sweet memories Stored away to please In silent moments when sweetness Supersedes life's ugly neatness. In silent moments! ((Maureen)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (03-11-2002 02:05 PM).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
recalling your works bathing in remembrances a new renaissance Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) This is so sad but beautiful, sweet friend, I pray too soon that joy will strum your heartstrings and you will again bathe in a rebirth of happiness to fill your heart forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I have a case of that too. Hugs |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Bernie, I appreciate your visits *s thank you M Janet Marie...It pleases me to know that you have read and responded to my words..I had a nicer response but the computer decided to cut me off just before submitting..*s so I had to start all over and my mind, as when writing my poems, never recalls the words so soon after. hugsss and thank you M |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Newell, loved your Silent Moments..enoughto maybe write a poem later when I can catch my breath *s thank you hugssss M I Thankyou..for being so sweet. *s hugssss M Noah...heartstings are knotted for now *s and happiness is fleeting for me...comes and goes with my moods Thank You for reading and your responses. passing shadows, when I find the cure I will let you know *s hugsssss Maureen |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Bump Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
ENJOYED |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
How could one forget you *s Thanks I for the bump..sometimes the lack of touch makes one feel invisible.. vandan, nice to see you *s hugss M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (03-14-2002 09:53 AM).] |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
m, wow...now this here was a really fantastic to read, but then again i've come to learn your work always is...you're really growing though my friend and it's lovely to see!! take care. amy "you can't stop |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
What a wonderful compliment..I can't believe how nice tonights poems and responses have been and how calming it is to me right now..*s Thank You hugss M |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Very nice Maureen you were able to convey those feelings well. I have had them too. floria Floria |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
~M~Style: this succint piece was brilliant! Dang...those last two lines are as good as a writer can write! Hope your doctor's appt went well. Take care of yourself, M. and have a grrrrrrrrrrreat weekend! JF |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Floria..thanks again...you have to try and remember the good through the bad to survive *s hugss M Hi Jeff..thanks for reading..yeah I know, I got style...or at least I am recognizable *s I don't know where it came from the other day, guess I was in a period of reminiscing..any praise from you is a delight *s M |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
M, See...you have so much sweet stuff in there! Wow. I am amazed at your experience. You really know how to touch my heart and soul.  Everybody thinks of changing humanity and nobody thinks of changing himself. Leo Tolstoy |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
See, Larry, "I" brought me back to remembering..and you *s hugs and thanks M |
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