Open Poetry #19 |
Minding |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Minding Mind, mine Fractured by time Scattered by thoughts I find Forming poem, of line by line Design M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (03-11-2002 10:27 AM).] |
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Accordionmaid Member
since 2001-10-28
Posts 153MA/USA |
Hey, cute! I like this, mind you. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Glad you found this sound...and to your liking *s M |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
love the rhythm hon..enjoyed hugs ~Vic |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Wow, ooohhhhh...I love the rhythm in this, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always sing with such a wonderful voice! (kiss on cheek) This flows gorgeously, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, I liked it too. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I like your mind |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Indeed a neat sweet treat. From a whirl, pearl, girl and 'tis swonderful. ((Maureen)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Victoria, Noah, Sy..thankyou for having read a piece of me. "I"...I like yours too. *s Silver Streak, the treat is when you read and respond and I know you have enjoyed my words.*s thanks Newell. |
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