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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-03-11 10:26 AM



Minding

Mind, mine
Fractured by time
Scattered by thoughts I find
Forming poem, of line by line
Design

M

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (03-11-2002 10:27 AM).]

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1 posted 2002-03-11 10:26 AM


Hey, cute!  I like this, mind you.
nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2002-03-11 10:28 AM


Glad you found this sound...and to your liking *s

M

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3 posted 2002-03-11 10:31 AM


love the rhythm hon..enjoyed hugs

           ~Vic

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4 posted 2002-03-11 10:45 AM




(smiles) Wow, ooohhhhh...I love the rhythm in this, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always sing with such a wonderful voice! (kiss on cheek) This flows gorgeously, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2002-03-11 10:51 AM


Maureen,
I liked it too.

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6 posted 2002-03-11 06:49 PM


I like your mind

Silver Streak
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7 posted 2002-03-11 07:11 PM


Indeed a neat sweet treat.
From a whirl, pearl, girl
and 'tis swonderful.

((Maureen))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2002-03-15 07:29 AM


Victoria, Noah, Sy..thankyou for having read a piece of me.


"I"...I like yours too. *s


Silver Streak, the treat is when you read and respond and I know you have enjoyed my words.*s  thanks Newell.


  

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