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Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2002-03-11 10:14 AM

While You’ve Been Gone
By: Noah Eaton
3/11/02

I wait each day
By the screen
I yearn for school to be over
Just to come home and see your name before me
I’ve felt lonely
Without you
Just waiting for you to be settled
So I can spend hours talking to you

While you’ve been gone
The road seems so long
I need you close to me
To keep me holding on
While you’ve been gone
The road seems so long
You are the one I need
You are the one I love

I see your name
On the IM screen
I try and talk to you
But it seems you are busy
I wish I could
Feel how you feel
So I know that everything
Is OK, and you’ll come back to me soon

While you’ve been gone
The road seems so long
I need you close to me
To keep me holding on
While you’ve been gone
The road seems so long
You are the one I need
You are the one I love

I need you
More than anything in the world
I want you
You are my dream girl

While you’ve been gone
The road seems so long
I need you close to me
To keep me holding on
While you’ve been gone
The road seems so long
You are the one I need
You are the one I love
I need you…
I need you…
I need you to hold on…

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-11-2002 10:14 AM).]

Accordionmaid
Member

since 2001-10-28

Posts 153
MA/USA

1 posted 2002-03-11 10:33 AM

Expressed so beautifully, with a smooth stream to it.

lone_poet707
Member

since 2001-11-17

Posts 70
black hole named Aylmer

2 posted 2002-03-11 10:36 AM

i luv this piece!
im sure there are many many ppl who have felt dis way. u expressed those feelings perfectly.
-Joe

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2002-03-11 11:01 AM

School will be over soon and you will be starting a new life..a life full of adventure..lots of good things in store for you ..i am sure hugss...enjoyed sweetie

~Vic

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2002-03-11 11:05 AM

Noah,
Good lyrics now you have to write the music.

Krissy
Senior Member

since 2002-02-22

Posts 556
kent England

5 posted 2002-03-11 11:12 AM

Noah hi there, you know that Joanna will be able to give you her full attention soon. Moving is very hard work, I know, believe me I know.

This is a wonderful piece of writing, your written the song of your heart

Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

N orth Carolina Girl
Senior Member

since 2001-12-04

Posts 962
NC,USA

6 posted 2002-03-11 11:54 AM

Noah,this was so sad but wonderfully written.

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

[This message has been edited by N orth Carolina Girl (03-11-2002 11:55 AM).]

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

7 posted 2002-03-11 04:04 PM

Noah, you have such a big heart and so full of love for others. I'm sure everything is ok and she will come back to you real soon. Don't fret.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

8 posted 2002-03-11 05:21 PM

Noah, she doesn't know what she's missing while she's away.

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

9 posted 2002-03-11 05:43 PM

Aww! That is so sweet (and so my life)!!! I don't know what else to say! *hugs*

I want to die peacefully, in my sleep, like my grandfather, not screaming, terrified, like his passengers.

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

10 posted 2002-03-11 06:16 PM

Things will all be settled soon Noah, just hang in there, keep writing, we all love reading your words. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

11 posted 2002-03-11 08:36 PM

I peak my head in here every couple of days! I'm sorry that I have been gone but I am extremely busy and have a lot of things to get done before i can come back to passions on a reagular basis. I know you miss me and believe me the feeling is mutual!
You just keep these master pieces coming ok sweety! Im still trying to adjust to my new house....

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

12 posted 2002-03-11 09:04 PM

Noah,
How deeply you express the ache of missing the one we love. Like feathers on gentle spring wind, to cease only when the summer sun returns. Well done. ThisDiamond

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

13 posted 2002-03-11 09:12 PM

Ahhh see Noah! Joanna is just busy right now...the time will go fast, you'll see and she will be back spending more time with you here at Passions. Not to fret.

~Hugs, Nancy~

~Sometimes all you really wish for...
is someone to wish for you.~

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