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Borrowed Mime (thanks Sunnyone for inspiration)
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Borrowed Mime (thanks Sunnyone for inspiration) |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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One fear supports notions we live on borrowed time another premise is that this is all staged mime nothing that you say or do really counts in the end, it seems just dust heaps mount. You could be a world leader and herald change or Shakespeare blocking actors on stage you could stand from balconies and shout appeals Or work among bankers and pickpocket ordeals. Discreet or vulgar are thrown into the heap the man upstairs has the casket locked for keeps; you work endlessly, there is a sense of false completion, your neighbour could ask what what the sense of your ambition. the sands in the deserts have buried times long gone yet you scrounge for truths where their n'er to be won. we live and die, create records, do we progress? with borrowed mime, how will I know the rest? [This message has been edited by ecrivan (03-11-2002 09:54 AM).] |
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Accordionmaid Member
since 2001-10-28
Posts 153MA/USA |
Wow, this is so interesting! So full of thought(s), and your method of writing it is just incredibly great. Love it. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, this is a wonderful inspiring poem, sweet friend, I too always wonder how we can find truth in life but all the while we wonder how much of our memory is selective when we review our thoughts and sometime sthey mime us and seem so obvious as we try to discover more! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is very thought-provoking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ecrivan, You wont and it makes no differance. Enjoyed the read. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Seymour, guess it doesn't then...you keep what you can thanks for sharing your view |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Acorn maid, you'll want to become friendly with one of your consumers, Madame Chipmunk..kidding, neat name, thanks for dropping in and giving me feedback |
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