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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2002-03-11 08:15 AM

Where goes the shadows
That runs from approaching day,
I hold my sorrows,
In a cold hearts hide away,
When goes the brightness
That displays my expressions,
I long for darkness
To hides sullen emotion;
How long last the light
That lingers me in the bright
Longing for shadows of night.

Gloom

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

1 posted 2002-03-11 08:28 AM

The shadows remain ... they're merely under attack, so to speak

Interesting write

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-03-11 08:38 AM

(sigh) Wow, your words always cast such vast poetic visions that grace these pages, sweet friend, this is awesome! I LOVE IT!!! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is a fabulous choka! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Aszard, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

3 posted 2002-03-11 08:46 AM

I really like this, Professor. I think I will try one of these chokas.

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

4 posted 2002-03-11 08:59 AM

Gloom,

I know your seek a darkened plight
One now attacked by Angel, Light
Insisting that you have Pure Sight
Eyes must open you cannot fight

For is it so Professor Gloom
All hopes for darkness are now doomed
Shades are now opened in your room
As you awaken to Spring's bloom?

((Gloom))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

5 posted 2002-03-11 09:10 AM

Thank you, Rex Allen McCoy,
Darkness always seems to be under attack
Never enough places to hide.
Pleased you enjoyed,

Thank you, Mistletoe Angel
Always a pleasure share with those that appreciate
As nicely as you do.

Thank you, SmartChick,
Glad you liked it and please do try,
Remember the rhyme is not a requirement
I just do it because of my temperament.

Thank you, Silver Streak,
Another wonderful poetic response,
But I’ve shades and shutters aplenty in my house,
And darkness and light cycle round.
Spring goes to Autumn, Summer to Winter,
Changes in time is the great truism

Gloom

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