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walker
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0 posted 2002-03-11 07:37 AM



Irrational
I stood
in a corner of your heart
as you ignored me
But here I am
in my favorite dress
a last chance to impress
Testing your attitude
testing a change
But you turn away
avoiding my eyes
as if for a minute
my eyes could ever break the spell
So you walk away
as I call your name
You deny your feelings well
But you turn back
tempted
and you kiss my lips
no words spoken
And you let me in
and I wonder
if I'll ever get used to this
But your road is too steep
and I get lost in this dream
and I can't find my way back
to where I need to be
And I want this game to end
but it's too late
I am in love again

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1 posted 2002-03-11 08:11 AM


Been there...done that, walker, but I haven't seen it described so well. You have captured the essense of that helpless feeling well....bummer
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2 posted 2002-03-11 08:34 AM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Walker, this is so very heartaching, my heart goes out to you and your tears, for I know this feeling too well and I pray now your love has been answered to fulfill your heart forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-03-11 09:15 AM


And I want this game to end
but it's too late
I am in love again

Walker, this touches my heart. I know how you feel.

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