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Ivy Rose
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0 posted 2002-03-10 11:12 PM






At night, the wagons roll
across the dusted plains
of our hearts, of our souls.
Sojourners, pioneers together.
We stake our claim to
the undiscovered territories,
to the pursuit of
our hearts' homestead.
Drifters we...drifting slowly
towards the expanded prairies,
the high midnight of our ecstasy.
How we explore the regions
undiscovered, the emotions
undisplayed before.Always looking
towards the exciting and the new.

So, the wagons roll onward,
across love's dusted plains
searching for that destination,
for that home which has so often

~~~seemed to have~~~
eluded us.

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1 posted 2002-03-10 11:17 PM


YES!! you said it perfectly! I really like this
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YAY!!! Ooohhhhhhh...this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may your search for love forever have you finding new worlds of joy and memories to cherish forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-03-10 11:36 PM


Very nice, Ivy. Let's just keep searching.

((Ivy))
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strbbux
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4 posted 2002-03-11 10:17 AM


Very nice Ivy Rose,

"We stake our claim to
the undiscovered territories,
to the pursuit of
our hearts' homestead."

searching, always searching for more. This is truly nice. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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5 posted 2002-03-11 10:18 AM


Enjoyed...James
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6 posted 2002-03-11 10:25 AM


Searching, searching...don't know why we do, but I guess we do.  

This is a lovely expression.  I enjoyed your poem.

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7 posted 2002-03-11 07:17 PM


Very much enjoyed this....and now,  we just
hop in our cars, put the top or windows
down and go for it....THEY should be
credited for this...For without them...where
would we be now??

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