Open Poetry #19 |
Undiscovered Territories |
Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
At night, the wagons roll across the dusted plains of our hearts, of our souls. Sojourners, pioneers together. We stake our claim to the undiscovered territories, to the pursuit of our hearts' homestead. Drifters we...drifting slowly towards the expanded prairies, the high midnight of our ecstasy. How we explore the regions undiscovered, the emotions undisplayed before.Always looking towards the exciting and the new. So, the wagons roll onward, across love's dusted plains searching for that destination, for that home which has so often ~~~seemed to have~~~ eluded us. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
YES!! you said it perfectly! I really like this |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! Ooohhhhhhh...this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may your search for love forever have you finding new worlds of joy and memories to cherish forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Very nice, Ivy. Let's just keep searching. ((Ivy)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Very nice Ivy Rose, "We stake our claim to the undiscovered territories, to the pursuit of our hearts' homestead." searching, always searching for more. This is truly nice. floria Floria |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Accordionmaid Member
since 2001-10-28
Posts 153MA/USA |
Searching, searching...don't know why we do, but I guess we do. This is a lovely expression. I enjoyed your poem. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very much enjoyed this....and now, we just hop in our cars, put the top or windows down and go for it....THEY should be credited for this...For without them...where would we be now?? |
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