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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-03-10 10:42 PM


Riding The Time Machine

If I could ride the time machine
I would go into the future
to see if the woman I love today
is still in my arms tomorrow.
If she wasn't then today would have
to be my forever because my only request
of time is to stay in her arms forever.

JamesLee
March10
2002


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Sunnyone
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1 posted 2002-03-10 10:44 PM


James, I wish you to find your time machine, and ride it into forever!  Enjoyed so much!

The road goes on forever, and the stories never end!
  
    


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2 posted 2002-03-10 10:49 PM




(smiles) Awwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I too wish for the future to brin you eternal love with the woman you love forever too, you are a very loving person and deserve the greatest happiness for dear life! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-03-10 10:59 PM


you are such a wonderfully romantic man....*sigh*
Sunshine
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4 posted 2002-03-11 07:13 AM



Sometimes it would be nice to think that but for a machine, we could simply know how our life was laid out...but then...if we were unhappy, and still with that person...where's the hope for a better tomorrow...

there y'go...making me think again!

Kit McCallum
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5 posted 2002-03-11 07:21 AM


"today would have to be my forever"

Beautiful phrasing James ... I hope your forevers are truly reflective of your todays. Much enjoyed!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

walker
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6 posted 2002-03-11 07:36 PM


Lovely wishes.
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