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Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2002-03-10 08:52 PM

Glimmer

Mirrored reflections
Eyes seeing through loving eyes
Reflections mirrored

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

1 posted 2002-03-10 09:23 PM

Oh I like it! I've always loved poems done in this format! Thanks for the read!!!

I want to die peacefully, in my sleep, like my grandfather, not screaming, terrified, like his passengers.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2002-03-10 09:29 PM

So delicate and so true. Art my friend.
Thanks for the lift. ThisDiamond

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-03-10 09:44 PM

...Perfect!...

~Sometimes all you really wish for...
is someone to wish for you.~

Mark Coburn
Member

since 2002-01-24

Posts 71

4 posted 2002-03-10 09:47 PM

looking out my gallery window
reflected is a man
with the beginnings of a plan
feet firm on dry land!!!!!!!!!!...mark

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

5 posted 2002-03-10 09:52 PM

Glow, little glow worm....

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2002-03-10 10:01 PM

Nice, its good to read here again. I miss you all so much when I am gone

Sandra

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

7 posted 2002-03-10 10:07 PM

Beautiful Senryu!!!! I like the way you turned the first and third lines around to give them a whole new meaning. ***Ivy Rose

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

8 posted 2002-03-10 10:31 PM

I wish I could do these like you

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

9 posted 2002-03-10 10:34 PM

Sunshine, you really are the best, sis!!!!

The road goes on forever, and the stories never end!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

10 posted 2002-03-11 01:57 PM

Beautiful. I have been inspired

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

11 posted 2002-03-11 03:01 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautifully and simply romantic, sweet friend, may you forever look through loves eyes and find this enchantment always! (big hugggssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is superb! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

12 posted 2002-03-11 03:42 PM

darn Balladeer took my line...

but you glimmer like no one else I know

The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives.
~* Albert Einstein *~

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

13 posted 2002-03-11 04:22 PM

PERFECT!!

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

14 posted 2002-03-11 04:54 PM

Brovo!!!!!
Bravo!!!!!

Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

15 posted 2002-03-11 05:15 PM

applauding and smiling here

GenXer
Senior Member

since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

16 posted 2002-03-11 11:50 PM

Very nice.

Dave

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

17 posted 2002-03-11 11:57 PM

Lovely indeed Sunshine~
Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

NapalmsConstantlyConfused

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 529

18 posted 2002-03-12 12:29 PM

not quite a palindrome, but certainly a beautiful moment caught in few words.
Well done!
-Dave

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