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Trying to rise above God - for Madame Chipmunk
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Trying to rise above God - for Madame Chipmunk |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA 
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Trying to rise above God (For Madame Chipmunk expanding on an answer to her comment to my poem, "Woman's hour") "He replied, "I saw Satan fall like lightning from heaven." NIV Luke 11:18 The spirit of God has been ripped apart Split into two sexes each with a heart A man with a seed, a woman with womb Captured in darkness in fleshly skin tombs. As flames of desire in woman reach out Man seeks to capture; what is it about? She tries to reunite God's Unity One complete spirit in heaven's far sea. Each time she breaks into children of men Spirit parts shattered; more pain spread again As teachers of cloth call God's calling sin God tries to unite when man goes within. So then Christ was born of Virgin Mary To reach broken spirit parts, contrary Show ev'ry part of God's Broken Spirit Must come back in love. Come people hear it! For all of this pain and darkness we find Was caused by man leaving woman behind. Breaking and trying to rise above God. Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher Silver Streak of Silver Springs, Florida March 10, 2002 Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (03-10-2002 07:52 PM).] |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
What an AMAZING view of God, Newell.... You're probably right.... God is male and female...and I think there is God in all creatures. Thanks for sharing.  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
You're welcome, Lyra. Just wanted to expand on my earlier comment.  ((Lyra)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
This is so nice Newell and so nice that you did it for Lyra, one of our favorite people. floria Floria |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! WOW, OH MY GOSH, I TOO FELL THIS WAY SOMEHOW OF CREATION!!! I feel that man became kind of careless, and women were made to help men attach themselves closer together to Him and to complete their hearts with the beauty of love! (big hugggsssss) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Newell, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, floria. You are both two of my very favorites!  ((floria)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you sweet Noah for your loving thoughts. ((Noah)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Newell,what a wonderful poem! Juanita |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, Juanita. Glad you liked. ((Juanita)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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