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Morcastlin
Member

since 2002-01-14

Posts 244
The Jersey Shore, USA

0 posted 2002-03-10 05:45 PM

Rushing into uncertainty
Darkness surrounds so blindingly
Always this straining just to see
the outcome of eternity

Blowing kisses in icy breeze
while hoping they will never freeze
in their journey through troubled trees
so they can meet their destinies

Why, oh why, is so much unkown
In life and love we're left alone
The future sits on God's great throne
and answers not to flesh and bone

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-03-10 06:06 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautifully bittersweet, sweet friend, I too can't help but cry when I feel confused and baffled by what the future brings, but I always claim to believe that He always has a plan for us all, for there is nothing to lose when it comes to having faith! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, always hold your dreams close and they will come true! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bonnie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2002-03-10 06:16 PM

Love this, the rhyme, the flow...and the
message within the words...well done..very
nice..

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

3 posted 2002-03-10 06:30 PM

Excellent phrasing and message, well said!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

4 posted 2002-03-10 06:45 PM

I like the wording in this and its message. Yes the future is not in flesh and bone.

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

5 posted 2002-03-10 07:35 PM

I really like this idea of the roullette wheel of life. Nicely done Morc, liked it a lot. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

6 posted 2002-03-10 10:38 PM

yes, we're all looking for the answers, but life is really just that roulette wheel, after all..........loved this!

The road goes on forever, and the stories never end!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2002-03-11 12:04 PM

Sometimes the wheel seems to spin out of control. But I guess it must know which way to go.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

8 posted 2002-03-11 02:15 AM

I loved the message you contained in this, as life is truly like a wheel, and I guess the trick is to never bet too much?

The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives.
~* Albert Einstein *~

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