Open Poetry #19 |
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A Touch (20 or less #2) |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA ![]() |
A Touch.. Lingering softness continuously sensual rising goosebumps trailing endlessly passionately flowing following curves leaving only sighs as touch ends... love begins... |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I am seriously liking these 20 or less of yours ![]() |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) This is soooooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, your gorgeous words of passion always bring a smile to my face! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, your words are always a pleasure to read! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sue....thank you....sad to say....you will have to wait till 2morrow for Nr. 3.... I am beginning to enjoy the 20 or less..is fun to write... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, You did well, enjoyed |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Hey Barry...Wanna trade days? Sounds like you're having a great one! lol |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ok, well, I can wait ![]() they are fun aren't they? ![]() |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Noah....thanx....jump in sometime with your own...I know you will do well.... Sy...thanx...glad you liked this... |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Duncan....sure...why not...I can still write can't I....Well, maybe not....Hope your's gets better.... Sue....YES, these are fun....a shame I waited so long before I wrote one....lots of fun...YEPPER! OK Sue...here is a freebie.... Eyes gleaming stare reflected beauty passionate vision gateway to the soul [This message has been edited by Magnus (03-10-2002 01:18 PM).] |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Magnus, Now you need to know...this is my all time favorite from you!!! Wooohooo. I'm really liking this a bunch. Could even feel it. Wow. Good job. ![]() Everybody thinks of changing humanity and nobody thinks of changing himself. Leo Tolstoy |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Cool! ![]() ![]() |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Larry C. thanx much....this is FUN .... Where have I been all this time....Hiding??? You do pretty fair at this yourself... |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Magnus - thanks for the memories of a touch such as this. Chris ![]() Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy this 20 or under is seriously excellent writing from you. Don’t stop you do it brilliantly. Wonderful writing as always Excellent writing here really excellent ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
There ya go Barry! And you hesitated to try...you are getting very very good at this! Hugs. ~Sometimes all you really wish for... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
S ! m g i l n |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Chris...you are very welcome...Thank You! Mushy...gee, I don't know...I kinda like this...so many ways it can go.. Nancy...very pleased you like it! KJ...Smiling back at yu! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I find this very touching... How well you portray the event ![]() |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This Diamond...thank you...I "feel" this is the way that I would love to be touched... or touch... |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
You're the king of "Twenty or less" ![]() And this is beautiful! ![]() Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Melissa....THANK YOU! I consider that a very nice complement....I enjoyed it, and will continue to do so in the future... |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Magnus...That's what I call poetic excellence. You bring us from the sensual to the passionate...all in a few short lines. ****Ivy Rose |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I like this style too. It goes well with you. Sandra |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
And I bet you could do it in five ![]() The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives. |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I taste your sweet bouquet savoring moonlight morsels within delicacies of night fragrant with sweet fruit and bonbons of you ~Wench Victoria |
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