Open Poetry #19 |
I Weave |
Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
I Weave I need to weave all my fantasies keeping me safe from realities Closing eyes to the world for a while I’ll spin a dream to bring forth a smile Walk with the man I love hand in hand while toes are tickled by golden sand To feel the sun warm upon our face and know the passion of love’s embrace Wish on the first star seen at night to be in the arms of shining knight Capture moonbeams to keep for our own as we venture into love’s unknown We’ll ride the winds over mountains high where never our love will we deny Feel the burning of love’s inner fire giving in to what our hearts desire I’ll weave me a fantasy today chasing all the hurt and pain away So into a world where love comes true I’ll go so that my heart can renew Karen Torbiak 2002© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
We'll ride the winds over mountains high where never our love will we deny Feel the burning of love's inner fire giving in to what our hearts desire Sounds good to me..can i come too?? ha..hugss ~Victoria~ "Silence is a friend who will never betray." — Confucius [This message has been edited by Victoria (02-16-2002 04:53 PM).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Karen, I am coming too! Gorgeous poem. Sandra |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed Karen...James |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Ah, Karen. Your fantasies are contagious. And do not be surprised when you girls run in to me up there wandering in the stars. I spend a lot of time up there. And I keep looking around. Looking for you. ((Karen)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (02-16-2002 03:28 PM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Karen - so lovely you write, I'm touching by this one. I wish you love and happiness.. BC |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
if only fantasy could become reality arthur |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Ah yes! I know this need, well done my friend! We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles |
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Wanda Member
since 2001-10-23
Posts 461 |
Karen; I'm still hoping this fantasy comes true for you. Wonderful poem. Wanda |
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Wanda Member
since 2001-10-23
Posts 461 |
Karen; I'm still hoping this fantasy comes true for you. Wonderful poem. Wanda |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Karen~ Keep weaving these beautiful words, each has a way of touching..... Lauren~ Step through the |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A beautifully woven fantasy, Karen. copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Karen, you wove a weave of starlight. You fly high above and turn fantasies into dreams and then reality. Beautiful! Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Beautiful fantasies Karen, and you write them so so well. lovely. floria Floria |
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