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Judgement (revised)
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Judgement (revised) |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Picture a a face of serenity observe surrounding ones of torment sleep can always create a dream man's soul shouts love and hate ugly monsters whisper fire fair angels sound trumpets blue skies hover by black storms cry they rain terrible laughter while your shadow is still death is still fresh as man's spirit fights to ascend, the judgement staff points at his end. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (02-16-2002 11:50 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...and that day comes for everyone. Good write! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Alright I'm picturing the face of serenity...nope it doesn't go with the poem, which is outstanding and prophetic I might add. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Martin - Really liked this one a lot. Man, that is one judgement I don't want to hear for a long time. Well done. Dave |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Dave, I have my fears too  Keth, MichaelAngelo's last judgement figures here |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Sunshime, silly of me to forget the surrounding facial expressions  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Just thought I'd show my face! But no, I did get the reference here...and that pointy stick!!! YOWSER! But, nothing like a little, um, incentive, eh?  Enjoyed, "e". |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Soooooooo wonderfully expressed, sweet friend, may we all embrace the wind and with our sense of judgement share our love to the world and bring harmony between ourselves! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet freind, God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Serenity, low and behold there is serenity here Noah, your thoughts are always appreciated |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Martin...this is well written but very frightening! I hope that God whomever, He or She may be...if He or She really is, is not too terribly judgemental....otherwise, I am in some big trouble.  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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