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Sunnyone
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0 posted 2002-03-10 04:49 AM




And when, at last, I'm all alone
with naught but thoughts to call my own,
the night time wraps around me, chill and black...
The time is perfect now, you see
The perfect time for reverie
Before tomorrow starts,
I must look back...

To learn the lessons as they come
by looking at them one by one
is how it always works for such as me...
Then, if I must, I right the wrong,
before I start tomorrow's song
The tune is sweeter,
from such reverie...

Forget my foes, but bless the friends
who've said I needn't make amends,
because we all are human in our ways...
So, now I think I'll close my eyes
Give reverie it's sure demise
My slate is ready,
for another day...

The road goes on forever, and the stories never end!
  
    


© Copyright 2002 Sunnyone - All Rights Reserved
Munda
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1 posted 2002-03-10 05:24 AM


Oh my! Beautifully written! Great poem.
Sunshine
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2 posted 2002-03-10 07:17 AM



Well and now look at the address would you...our Sunnyone has landed and has come home in more ways than one...

I have missed you very much, and welcome you back with open arms...

Sunnyone
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3 posted 2002-03-10 07:50 AM


oh thank you Munda, and so glad you enjoyed!!

and Sunshine!!!  I missed you too, but am enjoying my new life in England!!!  So, will see you here more often, I think........

The road goes on forever, and the stories never end!
  
    


Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-03-10 11:31 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I have missed you so so much! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) This is such a beautiful poem of looking to the future, sweet friend, I too always dream about sharing a lifetime of joy with my love and of so many other things when I dream too! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is beautiful! You have such a beautiufl heart, sweet Sunnyone, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

vandana
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5 posted 2002-03-10 11:34 AM


enjoyed
Victoria
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6 posted 2002-03-10 12:50 PM


This is so lovely Sunny..and btw i was born in England..glad you are enjoying your new life...hugss

              ~Vic

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7 posted 2002-03-10 01:48 PM


Well written piece - enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Ariana
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8 posted 2002-03-10 06:45 PM


Hey Sunny

Very happy to see that you came back to us, and as usual, you have written beautiful words and thoughts for us to ponder.  Keep them coming!!

D.Lester Young
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9 posted 2002-03-10 06:48 PM


This is an excellent piece and the meaning behind it.
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