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Rose Of Patience
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Rose Of Patience |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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Rose Of Patience  One single, fragile bud born of May blooming in a lush garden bouquet Velvet petals burst with the sun's grace of crimson smiles in mother nature's lace The heart sighs in awe of it's power cleansing soul with majestic shower It's purity, breathtaking as a kindred kiss intoxicating life with everlasting bliss For, love is patient like the rose it's beauty with time surely grows By Melissa P. Monette |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me smile, may spring forever wake in your heart and blossom with many roses of promising and comely love! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This was beautifully done Melissa, and you made me come and find it (you forgetting to send my links girl!) LOL, lazy aren't I. Truly a pretty ditty indeed. The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
A beautiful write Melissa. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
This is simply beautiful Melissa, floria Floria |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Couple this with warm spring's kiss sensations come in splendored bliss |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
beautifully done!!! Charisma |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Melissa - oh, I cannot wait to smell the roses once again. thankyou for this. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This is a truly beautiful poem of a rose... Amazing how flowers are so much of our world and our poetry....Maybe that is why we have them....to enjoy, write about and to give to those we love... |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Melissa, Ohhh!!!!! This poem is so beautiful I love roses, and you words are so graceful and flowing. Just stunning chickie Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Excellent rhyming!!!! This poem dazzles with its beautiful imagery and searing poetic tongue. ***Ivy Rose |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I love it. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Melissa We are saying goodbye to Summer and hello to Autumn here in Australia. Your words were as beautiful as your red rose bloom. I have more than 70 roses at home and this reminded me of them. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is just beautiful. I love roses. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you everyone There's just something about roses and love that just fits perfectly with poetry~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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