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Victoria
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0 posted 2002-03-10 12:56 PM



I came out of work and a note was stuck to my windshield
its said "call me if you would like to sell your car
leave your name and number and i will get back to you"
why would anyone offer to buy my car, just out of the blue?
it was an 87 Monte Carlo..emerald and the top was vinyl white
It was signed Toby..maybe the Travolta guy from the disco night
i remember he asked me where i worked
I told my husband about the note
he said" i bet you its that jerk"
and he took it from me, he didnt gloat
as he stuck it in the pocket of his gray sportscoat
I imagine he called Toby but i was afraid to ask
i wonder to this day..if it was a John Travolta mask?


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WOW!!! I LOVE IT!!! Then what happens, then what happens? Sorry, I just get so excited about your wonderful words always! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-03-10 01:42 AM


you are too funny noah ...hugss...no part three ..sorry haa
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3 posted 2002-03-10 10:04 AM


I love it when you get into writing your  little memory poems..they always  made my day.

hugssss
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4 posted 2002-03-10 10:53 AM


Awwwww...come on Vic!  No part three???

You are playing the game NOT FAIR!!!!!

Enjoyed this,  very good....

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5 posted 2002-03-10 11:38 AM


Oh Victoria, I was hoping for a series.  You are good at this...leading us on!   Now maybe if you were to get the note back out of his pocket and make that call....see if it was a mask afterall.
Hugs.

~Sometimes all you really wish for...
     is someone to wish for you.~

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6 posted 2002-03-10 12:44 PM


maureen..yes when i get writers block i have to resort to memories ha..

barry..i wish there was a part three ha..
although i started another book after that ha

nancy..thanks but im just telling the truth nancy ha..


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