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0 posted 2002-03-09 09:22 PM



A Kiss

Tenderly tasted
as tongues fend
against deep sighs
of lust

Touching tips
twirling temptation
language known
by all in love

© Copyright 2002 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-09 09:23 PM


Perfect.
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2 posted 2002-03-09 09:39 PM


Barry!  Yes!  You did it!
...and I could tenderly taste the passion.
Good one.  ~Hugs, Nancy~

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     is someone to wish for you.~

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3 posted 2002-03-09 11:26 PM


Ah, very very beautiful. Well said, I loved it!     

*Krista Knutson*

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4 posted 2002-03-09 11:33 PM


Beautiful indeed

The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives.
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5 posted 2002-03-09 11:52 PM


I love these kind of kisses...ha...mmmm

                        ~Vic

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6 posted 2002-03-10 03:05 AM


Barry,
Whadyamean your last? Tell me you weren't looking for pity votes? Well no pity here my man. You nailed it. Sorry for the pun! Great job...how's that?

Everybody thinks of changing humanity and nobody thinks of changing himself. Leo Tolstoy

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7 posted 2002-03-10 05:52 AM


enjoyed...
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8 posted 2002-03-10 07:19 AM



Certainly never the last...
GO for it...

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9 posted 2002-03-10 09:04 AM


Sensually beautiful. Hope it is not your last. floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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10 posted 2002-03-10 11:26 AM




(smiles) Wow, ooohhhhh...this is sensually gorgeous, sweet friend, your wonderful words always shine with passion at its finest and the flame of kismet love! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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11 posted 2002-03-10 12:43 PM


this is incredibly YUMMY!!!!
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12 posted 2002-03-10 12:57 PM


Perfection...indeed!
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13 posted 2002-03-10 01:34 PM


Simply smoochable. Chris

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