Lonely.........an acrostic

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SEA

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with you

0 posted 2002-03-10 12:23 PM

Linger here, and touch gently
Observe not, the tears that escape
Neglect their meaning, or the lack there of….
Elemental need in me, so profound
Linger here, in this heart of mine
Yearning will fade….eventually

~SEA~

Auguste

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By the sea

1 posted 2002-03-10 12:27 PM

I will linger there for as long as you want, sweet friend. It's a very nice place to spend some time, or even take up residence.

(((hugs)))

Michael

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2 posted 2002-03-10 12:29 PM

(big hugggssssss) Aw, this is so very sad, sweet friend, I too can relate to these feelings ever so much, for only recently have I found my Joanna and am close to meeting her, when before I felt depressed all the time and never thought I'd get this far! (kiss on cheek) I hope now the yearning has been replaced in your heart by sweet love, sweet friend, you deserve the greatest smiles of all, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Auguste

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By the sea

3 posted 2002-03-10 12:31 PM

I think I'll take up residence, if ya don't mind.

Stars will shine when I am gone
Earth will spin on as before
Gulls still race along the shore
Morning star, still kiss the dawn

~ M. Auguste

SEA

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with you

4 posted 2002-03-10 12:43 PM

Michael, just stay ok?

Noah, thanks sweetie, did you get your email?

Honeybee
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5 posted 2002-03-10 01:03 AM

An excellent acrostic...you just keep getting better and better

Tonight, this speaks to me deeply~

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

rosepetals25

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6 posted 2002-03-10 01:09 AM

Susan,

This is soooooooo good

You found the perfect words

And the picture fits so well.. I wish I did this *chuckles*

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (03-10-2002 01:10 AM).]

Skyfire

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7 posted 2002-03-10 01:12 AM

So well done Susan! I like a lot!

I want to die peacefully, in my sleep, like my grandfather, not screaming, terrified, like his passengers.

Mysteria

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8 posted 2002-03-10 01:25 AM

Nicely done Susan and love Stephen Hanks too, the combination was perfect.

The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives.
~* Albert Einstein *~

SEA

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with you

9 posted 2002-03-10 01:31 AM

Melissa, from you, I smile, thank you!!

Tara, girl you rock, thank you

Skyfire, thanks a bunch!!

Mysteria, thank you for showing me his art....I love it...and thank you

[This message has been edited by SEA (03-10-2002 01:31 AM).]

strbbux
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10 posted 2002-03-10 09:37 AM

Sea I loooooove this so much.And the picture adds to it so much. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Janet Marie
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11 posted 2002-03-10 09:51 AM

You took a single word and turned it into poetry...the pic is the perfect touch.
Linger is such a lovely word.
Well done Sea-girlie...havent seen an acrostic in a while.

Awake again I can't pretend ... and I know I'm alone ...
And so close to the end of the feelings we've known.

~Jackson Browne~

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

12 posted 2002-03-10 09:53 AM

I like that picture, too...and you keep writing such wonderful poetry to go with it...

SmartChick
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13 posted 2002-03-10 10:06 AM

This is just beautiful, Sea. I love the picture, too.

amusemi
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14 posted 2002-03-10 10:36 AM

Cool presentation. Very nice!

vandana

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15 posted 2002-03-10 11:06 AM

enjoyed

Auguste

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By the sea

16 posted 2002-03-10 11:16 AM

Okay

(((hugs)))

Stars will shine when I am gone
Earth will spin on as before
Gulls still race along the shore
Morning star, still kiss the dawn

~ M. Auguste

Silver Streak
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17 posted 2002-03-10 12:18 PM

Lots
Of
Nice
Enjoyable
Love to
You.

((Susan))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Magnus

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18 posted 2002-03-10 01:36 PM

Leave to me
Only dreams
Never lost
Even if
Love is not
Your wish

Excellent sue, much enjoyed your's....

Nightshade

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just out of reach

19 posted 2002-03-10 01:42 PM

Well done indeed SEA!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Charisma

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20 posted 2002-03-10 02:07 PM

Beautiful done as always Sea....outstanding piece.

((hugs))
Charisma

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Canada eh.

21 posted 2002-03-10 02:12 PM

Love it Sue! Beautifully done! Hugs!

~Sometimes all you really wish for...
is someone to wish for you.~

Nan

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22 posted 2002-03-10 02:30 PM

Lonely was never so Lovely...

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