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Krawdad
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0 posted 2002-03-09 05:30 PM


Weeping Cold



In loud sobs
and gushes
weeps the cold.

The in-between season
has come calling,
clearly falling.

Crystals are
soon laid leaden
all about.

The dry winter,
encased now,
is fragile.




© Copyright 2002 Krawdad - All Rights Reserved
Decaflame
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1 posted 2002-03-09 05:31 PM



Yes.

Where does one go to make requests?  If a simple "more" would do, then...

more, please.

Martie
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2 posted 2002-03-09 05:51 PM


Thank you
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3 posted 2002-03-09 06:50 PM




(smiles) Your gorgeous words are always an inspiration to us all, sweet friend, this is wonderful! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, such natural, pure imagery fills your voice! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet E.J, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-03-09 07:38 PM


This a wonderful write. Enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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5 posted 2002-03-09 07:41 PM


This is wonderful.  The in-between seasons...like it just cannot make up it's mind...and the wind howls tonight.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Sometimes all you really wish for...
     is someone to wish for you.~

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