Open Poetry #19 |
Used To Be |
Carolina Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 224Myrtle Beach, SC |
Your touch used to bring fire burning hot Now ashes are left where love was not. Your delicate kisses used to suspend in me Now crash landing we're no longer a "we". Your arms used to embrace with tightest grip Now all I feel is you letting me slip. You used to make love like you wanted more. Now it's hurry up so you can go out the door. You used to mean it when you said "I love you". Now you only say it because you know I want you to. You used to sleep with me til I could hear you snore Now the beer in the fridge calls for just one more. You used to see me smile after a night of bliss Now you ask "Why ya crying? What did I miss?" You used to be my love, my life in every way Now you wonder where it went and when it went away. Live today as if it's your last. Love today as if it's your first. Lisa |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sad sigh) Oh Carolina, this is so very sad, my heart goes out to you and your tears and I hope now love has again filled your heart and you again sing with its beauty and trust! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Carolina, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You have expressed these feelings well...James |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Carolina, How can they be so clueless? Sorry! I can't help myself. Well done but challenging thoughts. |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
Very nice. A lot to think about. Mike |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Carolina - well done....I know that feeling of "I might as well be talking to myself" and then....suddenly you are. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Carolina, and you know, the dumb guy doesn't even know what he's missing. What a tragedy. ((Carolina)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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