Open Poetry #19 |
Of Moon |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The times when nothing feels right, I look upon the moon The change it knows and so controls, something must be coming soon Though I don't know the what it of's, or even of the when it comes And for this time I can't know why, or even of the place it froms In times like this my only want, a cave, the solitary seek of dreams To leave the havoc of too many thoughts, to leave the longing as it steams Though I can't say the right or wrong, or even if I might belong And for this time I cannot know, of moonlight ribbons sleek and strong In times when no one seems to care, it is myself I treasure there My breath in vapor trails, of moist in whisper voice, and midnight air Though I am not and yet I am, in gaze upon the glimmering and liquid frost And for this time I cannot feel the darkened chill, as certainly to wonder lost Copyright Kkh 3/8/02 |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Soooooo beautifully bittersweet, dearest friend, I too think we all find ourselves looking on the dark side of the moon every now and then, but always stay true youself and your dreams and always be let your heart shine like the Lady Luna you are destined to be! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I like this. The moon can be a powerful source, heightening inner strength and harmony. And when things get rough in this world, sometimes the greatest solace is found within, even when we don't understand all the forces that surround and affect us. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
ThisDiamond A beautifully expressed poem of external and internal confusion, yet I feel strong inner strength in the treasure you find in yourself. Well done! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
diamond girl, you paint a beautiful picture of the wonder and strength of solitude when it is needed... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Thank you everyone... and love the cat...looks a little "moony" too, dontcha think? Good feeling to write and share. ThisDiamond |
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