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Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2002-03-08 08:34 PM

(This is for my love Joanna)

Diamonds Of The Soft
By: Noah Eaton
3/8/02

When you first stepped into my life
When I first knew your name, I happily cried
"Joanna!"
"Joanna!"
Your laughter brings tears of joy to my eyes
I hold no objection to your affectionate light

When I lay underneath my velvet blanket
I spend hours just dreaming of you, kissing your lips
Skipping in the soigne curtains of Lady Luna
Singing scherzos, two sparrows under God's umbrella

Fifteen minutes after I get ready for bed
I swear it almost feels like I'm holding you, you're still in my head
My heart beats happily, I feel like a fool for you
But I don't mind because you are my young honeymoon

Diamonds of the soft
Fill my eyes
Every time I think of you
You happily make me cry
Knowing God has given me you
An angel for being the loving boy I am

I dream of sharing romantic candlelight dinners on the patio
Anytime, anywhere, we're dancing tango
Rolling around in the sand with you, barefoot and deep in love
You are all my doctrines of rapture, you are the one I will always dream of

Now I see myself roller-blading with you down Palm Beach
We take the long way home, both dreaming what we are thinking underneath
Singing in the rain, singing as we're listening to Shakira
Without Walkmans on, listening to loves music in every heartbeat we sigh, down the crystal pennisula

Diamonds of the soft
Fill my eyes
Every time I think of you
You happily make me cry
Knowing God has given me you
An angel for being the loving boy I am

Tears fall from my eyes happily...
Every time I look at you
Every time I look at you
Every time I look at you
I love you...

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-08-2002 08:34 PM).]

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

1 posted 2002-03-08 09:16 PM

"Diamonds of the soft
Fill my eyes
Every time I think of you
You happily make me cry
Knowing God has given me you
An angel for being the loving boy I am"

Just like a song Noah, I found myself singing to it. Wonderful love poem. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

2 posted 2002-03-08 09:23 PM

Awww Noah! This is such a beautiful love poem.

srsmith25
Junior Member

since 2002-02-07

Posts 22
Indiana

3 posted 2002-03-08 09:31 PM

Great poem. I'm sure your love will love it. I wish I could write just one love poem. That is something I've never done. You done it beautifully.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2002-03-08 10:00 PM

Love is a precious gift to get and give...
well said, and lucky love. ThisDiamond

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

5 posted 2002-03-09 12:46 PM

Noah,

this is lovely and so very romantic

Michael

Stars will shine when I am gone
Earth will spin on as before
Gulls still race along the shore
Morning star, still kiss the dawn

~ M. Auguste

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

6 posted 2002-03-09 10:59 AM

Me thinks she is one lucky woman sweet Noah

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

7 posted 2002-03-09 11:44 AM

Beautiful Noah..hugss..you have a wonderful heart..

~Vic

ShadowRider
Senior Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 1038
USA

8 posted 2002-03-09 03:57 PM

Mmmm MMMM good, such a great contrasting metaphor
of beautiful eyes, beholding their beloved.
You scored a Three Pointer with this one, Noah!
tSR

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