»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #19
»
Tears
| Open Poetry #19 |
|
Tears |
|
|
Contabo Member
since 2001-11-21
Posts 159 |
Tears When winter's thaw ushers in the warmth of spring bringing the season's annual downpour of emotions…. that life might be extended by washing the dust from my soul. Contabo [This message has been edited by Contabo (03-08-2002 05:49 PM).] |
||
| © Copyright 2002 Contabo Monami - All Rights Reserved | |||
Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  WOW!!! Ooohhhhhh...I love it, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always shine with such wonderful imagery, this one roared with thunder and flashed with poetic lightning! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Contabo, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
||
Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
yes I always feel better after a good cry, but never penned it so beauifully Write what you feel, feel what you wrtie. |
||
|
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Very nicely done, Contabo. Cleansing and refreshing tears can be quite healing and rejuvenating. |
||
|
Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Excellent use of a metaphor, very well said! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
||
|
Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
nicely written, enjoyed your poem. |
||
|
Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Nicely done, very gentle... *smiles* ~Tier |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
