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Open Poetry #19

Would You Take My Hand?

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2002-03-07 05:36 PM

Today Is the day
To be joy,
Today Is the day
To ask you a question
About the way
you feel about me
You got an answer
From me
How I feel about you?
Would you take my hand?
Today
I feel happy
happy to be yours,
So I ask you
to take my hand
Would yo take my hand?
And walk with me
Because I love you ,
And you make my day
Couldn't stop smiling at myself,
The way you smiled at me
Today Is the day,
Would you take my hand?

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

1 posted 2002-03-07 05:38 PM

yes when in love we smile from ear to ear dont we?..enjoyed vandana hugs

~Vic

"Mistakes are the portals of discovery."
-- James Joyce

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

2 posted 2002-03-07 05:39 PM

Vandana, she is truly crazy if she doesn't. Wonderful poem here. Lovely, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-03-07 05:50 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, yep, whoever would want to miss out on your offer of true happiness truly is crazy, for you are a very loving person that deserves all the happiness of love always! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sahring!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

4 posted 2002-03-09 12:51 PM

enjoyed your poem Vandana, nicely written.

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